Talk:Take Me Home (Cher song)/GA1

GA Review

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Reviewer: WikiRedactor (talk · contribs) 23:36, 4 March 2014 (UTC)

Note: I will be doing my spot-checking after my first run-through of the article.

General

• 1 disambiguation link to correct.
  • Done. Prism △ 12:13, 5 March 2014 (UTC)
• Can you choose a consistent format for the date in the citations?
  • Done. Prism △ 12:13, 5 March 2014 (UTC)

Infobox and introduction

• Can you use {{start date}} for the release date? It should work even if a specific day isn't mentioned.
  • Done. Prism △ 12:13, 5 March 2014 (UTC)
• Which versions are the first two lengths provided for?
  • There are no names for those versions, I refrained from naming them as it would be WP:OR.
• You mention that "take me home" is pretty much asking for sex in the "Background and composition" section; that might be good to note in the introduction.
  • Done. Prism △ 12:13, 5 March 2014 (UTC)
• Maybe instead of commenting specifically on what AllMusic and Billboard thought, you can make a general statement of their overall opinions.
  • Done. Prism △ 12:13, 5 March 2014 (UTC)

Background and composition

• Can you clarify that Stars, I'd Rather Believe in You, Cherished and Two the Hard Way are studio albums? I'd also recommend including the years of their releases.
  • Done and done, although I only wrote 1977 once as it is the date for both Cherished and Two the Hard Way.

Release and reception

• There is one instance where "Take Me Home" is not put in quotations, please fix this.
  • Added quotations.
• Can you write out United States instead of abbreviating it as the US? Just so it's clear for everyone.
  • Done.
• You can just say in New Zealand without mentioning Oceania at all.
  • Removed Oceania. Prism △ 12:13, 5 March 2014 (UTC)
• Can you mention its certification in the United States in this section?
  • Just learned how to cite the certification table reference twice, so, done. Prism △ 12:13, 5 March 2014 (UTC)

Live performances

• Looks good!

Charts and certifications!

• Looks good!

More to come... WikiRedactor (talk) 23:53, 4 March 2014 (UTC)

• Done what you have pointed out. Prism △ 12:13, 5 March 2014 (UTC)

Sophie Ellis-Bextor cover

• You don't need to put "(Cher song)" in the infobox.
  • Fixed.
• Instead of "somewhat", what about using the term "moderately"?
  • Replaced.
• Do you mean "indefinitely"?
  • I removed the adverb completely, as it was really unnecessary.
• The iTunes citation in the track listing is missing iTunes/Apple in the publisher field.
  • Sorry, just added.

The spot-checking went smooth as ever, and after this last set of corrections are addressed, I will be more than happy to pass the article! WikiRedactor (talk) 21:03, 5 March 2014 (UTC)

• I have fixed everything! Prism △ 21:10, 5 March 2014 (UTC)

Passing! WikiRedactor (talk) 21:18, 5 March 2014 (UTC)

The discussion above is closed. Please do not modify it. Subsequent comments should be made on the appropriate discussion page. No further edits should be made to this discussion.