Talk:Super Smash Bros. (video game)/GA1

GA Review

• First sentence is faaaar too long.
  • Done.
• "It was followed by the top selling game Super Smash Bros. Melee for the Nintendo GameCube in 2001 and Super Smash Bros. Brawl for the Wii in 2008." - I don't think you need to list all these... just list Melee (if that), or (preferably) talk about the series.
• "who were also responsible for the Kirby and EarthBound intellectual properties," - I don't know if this is relevant enough to go in the lead...
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• All internet refs need publishers and accessdates at least.
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• Ref 5... 1) Doesn't jump to anywhere on the N64 article. 2) Is slightly confusing as to what it's trying to achieve (I'd put the link inline and have an ACTUAL ref there for that statement).
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• "This game mode was later called Classic Mode in both sequels" - rmv "later" and change "both" to "subsequent", see if that reads better.
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• First paragraph of the Playable characters section is more of a development section thing...
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• Some of the reviews (eg. allgame) aren't included in the reviewbox, and vice versa.
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• Overall more could be said about specific aspects of reception (gameplay/graphics/sound/multiplayer).

All refs seem OK otherwise, images good, neutral and stable. giggy _(:O) 10:40, 14 June 2008 (UTC)