Talk:Structure implies multiplicity
Latest comment: 12 years ago by Squandermania in topic 1st paragraph
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1st paragraph edit
The first paragraph is confusing and horrible to read. DoItAgain 13:25, 19 August 2006 (UTC)
- How so? Hyacinth 21:33, 19 August 2006 (UTC)
- Well, the grammar is bad, the sentences are too long and convoluted and technical terms are not defined clearly and unambiguously. Remember that the general reader will need a clear and simple introduction to the subject. --Tdent 18:01, 17 September 2006 (UTC)
I agree. I don't understand the concept and I read it several times over. If I wasn't set on understanding it I wouldhave given up a long time ago.--SurrealWarrior 14:05, 18 January 2007 (UTC)
Ditto. Squandermania (talk) 18:24, 26 October 2011 (UTC)
Wrong Link edit
The John Clough link points to a footballer not the mathematician/musician Rpm13 (talk) 03:41, 1 September 2011 (UTC)