Talk:Soviet destroyer Tbilisi

Latest comment: 5 years ago by Peacemaker67 in topic GA Review


GA Review edit

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Reviewer: Peacemaker67 (talk · contribs) 05:49, 23 October 2018 (UTC)Reply


This article is in good shape. Just a couple of comments from me:

  • where were the torpedo mounts located, if known?
    • Added
  • it isn't clear what Zolotoy Rog is, there is a mix of Russian and English names for bays, I think you could go with the English name for it, which is apparently Golden Horn Bay?
  • I would prefer sticking with Russian because there isn't an English name for Posyet Bay, hence I have included the transliteration in parentheses for Ulysses Bay as it is sometimes known as Uliss, even in English. I also added location details as Zolotoy Rog is simply moving anchorages as both are at Vladivostok. Kges1901 (talk) 10:35, 23 October 2018 (UTC)Reply
  • Nothing unique in Whitley?
    • No, much was contradictory to the info in later sources.--Sturmvogel 66 (talk) 12:44, 23 October 2018 (UTC)Reply

That's it. Peacemaker67 (click to talk to me) 06:21, 23 October 2018 (UTC)Reply

Thanks for the review.--Sturmvogel 66 (talk) 12:44, 23 October 2018 (UTC)Reply

This article is well-written, verifiable using reliable sources, covers the subject well, is neutral and stable, contains no plagiarism, and is illustrated by appropriately licensed images with appropriate captions. Passing. Nice work! Peacemaker67 (click to talk to me) 00:16, 24 October 2018 (UTC)Reply