Talk:Social media use by Barack Obama

Latest comment: 1 year ago by Thy Pyrometer in topic Really bad grammar and also neutrality issues
Former good articleSocial media use by Barack Obama was one of the Social sciences and society good articles, but it has been removed from the list. There are suggestions below for improving the article to meet the good article criteria. Once these issues have been addressed, the article can be renominated. Editors may also seek a reassessment of the decision if they believe there was a mistake.
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DateProcessResult
June 22, 2012Good article nomineeListed
July 12, 2012Articles for deletionNo consensus
July 24, 2012Articles for deletionKept
August 1, 2012Deletion reviewEndorsed
October 13, 2012Good article reassessmentDelisted
Current status: Delisted good article

Obama on Blackberry edit

I have found results of Obama's Blackberry use. I am unsure if it is part of social media; if not, then I will be proposing a re-broadening of this article's scope again. --George Ho (talk) 18:27, 13 August 2012 (UTC)Reply

I fail to understand what this has got to do with social media. At best, one could argue it is tangentially related in that Obama might use his Blackberry to connect with social media, but the device he uses seems hardly significant. We know he uses his Blackberry for email, but I am unaware of any reliable source that says he uses it for social media. Indeed, he might also carry an iPhone or Android device specifically for that purpose. Or maybe he borrows one from someone else. Or maybe he uses a PC or a Mac. -- Scjessey (talk) 19:55, 13 August 2012 (UTC)Reply
First of all, I see that Google exists, but what information has actually been found? Darryl from Mars (talk) 13:57, 18 August 2012 (UTC)Reply

What's significant is that Obama was embraced several new media which is why I had originally proposed that it be named Communications of Barack Obama, Blackberry is a new medium not available before these previous two elections on a widespread basis. There is broad consensus to expand this topic beyond twitter and adding a section on Blackberry follows the spirit of that consensus in addition to the plurality that supported communications or public relations in general and even cited Blackberry.LuciferWildCat (talk) 21:07, 15 August 2012 (UTC)Reply

That doesn't make any sort of sense at all. There's no evidence to suggest Obama uses his Blackberry to engage with social media. The article should focus on the social media services, not devices. -- Scjessey (talk) 16:29, 18 August 2012 (UTC)Reply
Why? When we can expand it and make it more comprehensive and put all this new technology into description for posterity? Don't be such a Luddite.LuciferWildCat (talk) 21:41, 21 August 2012 (UTC)Reply
This article is about social media, not devices. -- Scjessey (talk) 15:49, 30 August 2012 (UTC)Reply
It is about devices, because devices are used to use and promote and expand and create social media. That is a false dichotomy amounting to we can only speak about an artists music not the CDs MP3s iTunes sales and other highly interrelated variables pssst.Chiquitiqua (talk) 23:23, 21 October 2012 (UTC)Reply

Wiki Education assignment: Introduction to Political Communication edit

  This article was the subject of a Wiki Education Foundation-supported course assignment, between 4 January 2023 and 17 March 2023. Further details are available on the course page. Student editor(s): Robert.darragh, Coopermull, Delacruzjameson02, Abigailmanurung (article contribs). Peer reviewers: SkylerChiabai, Elizabeth.stites, Nikkig1221, GrayMessersmith.

— Assignment last updated by Nikkig1221 (talk) 04:18, 20 February 2023 (UTC)Reply

Really bad grammar and also neutrality issues edit

While in WP:GOODFAITH, it is quite clear that a major contributor to this article (I haven't traced it to the source yet) has either bad autocorrect or just bad grammar. Some obviously unpolished parts containing undeveloped links (https://obamawhitehouse.archives.gov/blog/2016/10/31/digital-transition-how-presidential-transition-works-social-media-age and https://www.pewresearch.org/journalism/2012/08/15/how-presidential-candidates-use-web-and-social-media/) have been removed. There is political bias present (tons of deletions of biased content in the history). See section "The Change in Campaigns." Thy Pyrometer (talk) 09:20, 2 April 2023 (UTC)Reply