Talk:Smin Awa Naing
Latest comment: 1 year ago by RoySmith in topic Did you know nomination
 | A fact from Smin Awa Naing appeared on Wikipedia's Main Page in the Did you know column on 16 December 2022 (check views). The text of the entry was as follows:
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Did you know nomination edit
- The following is an archived discussion of the DYK nomination of the article below. Please do not modify this page. Subsequent comments should be made on the appropriate discussion page (such as this nomination's talk page, the article's talk page or Wikipedia talk:Did you know), unless there is consensus to re-open the discussion at this page. No further edits should be made to this page.
The result was: promoted by RoySmith (talk) 15:30, 10 December 2022 (UTC)
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- ... that Smin Awa Naing's regiment mortally wounded Crown Prince Minye Kyawswa of Ava, effectively ending Ava's most serious invasion of the Hanthawaddy Kingdom? Source: Chronicle sources on the actual battle of Dala: (Maha Yazawin Vol. 2 2006: 48), (Yazawin Thit Vol. 1 2012: 259) and (Hmannan Vol. 2 2003: 43)Academic sources on the battle being the height of the war, and how "little more fighting" (Harvey 1925: 95) continued listlessly and "half-heartedly", (Htin Aung 1967: 92–93)
Created by Hybernator (talk). Self-nominated at 22:24, 20 November 2022 (UTC).
| General: Article is new enough and long enough |
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Policy compliance:
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- I don't see the "most serious invasion" part in the article itself. The closest would be "most fierce attacks of the war", but it doesn't refer to them as a single invasion.
| Hook: Hook has been verified by provided inline citation |
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| QPQ: Done. |
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Mostly fine except for what I commented on above. As soon as that's addressed, the hook will be ready. An anonymous username, not my real name 01:57, 23 November 2022 (UTC)
- An anonymous username, not my real name, thanks for the review. That it was the height the war was mentioned in the article with a couple of academic citations. I've rewritten the sentence for better clarity. Please review again. Thanks. Hybernator (talk) 01:52, 24 November 2022 (UTC)
- Thank you for the speedy improvement. It's all good now
An anonymous username, not my real name 02:17, 24 November 2022 (UTC)
- Thank you for the speedy improvement. It's all good now
