Talk:Siegfried Huneck/GA1
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Reviewer: AryKun (talk · contribs) 07:19, 12 May 2022 (UTC)
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- Okay, pretty solid article overall, but I have a few comments. Suggestions for rewording are optional, while those based on MOS should generally be implemented.
- The lead shouldn't have any citations, especially since all the info seem to already be cited in the body.
- 9 September 1928 – 9 October 2011 → 9 September, 1928 – 9 October, 2011 per MOS:DATECOMMA
- Not quite; as explained in the link, that comma style only applies to month–day–year format. The applicable policy here is MOS:BIRTHDATE. Esculenta (talk) 16:06, 12 May 2022 (UTC)
- All the German words and phrases in the article need lang templates.
- "primary school here" → "primary school there"
- "delay because of" → "delay caused by"
- "study chemistry University of Jena" → "study chemistry at the University of Jena"
- "time, so no" → "time and so no"
- "on the chemistry of amino-derivatives of pentacyclic triterpenes" → "on the chemistry of amino-derivatives of pentacyclic triterpenes"
- Liverwort is duplinked.
- "retirement, in 1995 Huneck" → "retirement, in 1995, Huneck"
- Are the binominal authorities for the species named after him necessary? They don't seem particularly relevant.
- Perhaps add a photo of one of the species named after him, as otherwise the article entirely lacks images.
- Couldn't find any free images of these species for use (Opegrapha huneckii doesn't really count as it's a junior synonym). However, I did add a fair-use image of him. Esculenta (talk) 16:06, 12 May 2022 (UTC)
- On what basis were the publications mentioned chosen?