Talk:Siege of Kamarja/GA1

GA Review

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Reviewer: Sturmvogel 66 (talk · contribs) 22:25, 13 December 2013 (UTC)

I'll get to this shortly.--Sturmvogel 66 (talk) 22:25, 13 December 2013 (UTC)

• No DABs and external links good.
• Image appropriately licensed.
• Dabusiyya, which was closer to Kamarja The last last two words seem redundant
• Otherwise,--Sturmvogel 66 (talk) 16:27, 21 December 2013 (UTC) nicely done.

• Hello and merry Christmas! Well, I had a look and though it may be redundant, I still think that the extra two words are necessary to show that Dabusiyya was closer to Kamarja, not Samarkand. Cheers, Constantine ✍ 23:32, 26 December 2013 (UTC)