Talk:Shivalik-class frigate/GA1
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Reviewer: QatarStarsLeague (talk · contribs) 03:02, 9 June 2013 (UTC) I am very excited about these sorts of articles. QatarStarsLeague (talk) 03:02, 9 June 2013 (UTC)
Lead & infobox edit
There needs to be mention of the class' namesake within the body of the article. Already mentioned(?) in 2nd paragraph, last line.
- I consider the body of the article to exclude the lead and info box. Sorry for the turbidity :)
Done :)
- I consider the body of the article to exclude the lead and info box. Sorry for the turbidity :)
Design and description edit
You will need to explain (wikilink) mentions of LAN and of chapati- and dosa-. 
Done
General characteristics and propulsion edit
Fine here.
Electronics and sensors edit
Fine.
Armament edit
Instead of Western, you could simply say Israeli.
Hal Dhruv or Sea King? Are they interchangeable? Or do they vary by ship? Done
Construction and service edit
Please wikilink the JMSDF. Done
"...deployed in the South China Sea." In what capacity? Done
Ships edit
The next two sections are fine.
Conclusion edit
Very nice article. It has been delightful both observing and participating in the expansion of the GA Indian Warship section. Once everything has been fixed, I will pass this article. Congratulations! QatarStarsLeague (talk) 02:08, 10 June 2013 (UTC)