Talk:Shiva Star

Latest comment: 17 years ago by Edwin Herdman in topic Marked for POV, Weasel Words and Cleanup

There's very little information here, it doesn't even say what Country it is talking about (though I assume it's the US). --Hibernian 23:41, 20 September 2006 (UTC)Reply

It's also kinda paranoid. I'll flag it with something . . .

Marked for POV, Weasel Words and Cleanup edit

This article has been written by a user who is, frankly, a tinfoil hat. "Is or was..." and "But there is suspicion..." make this clear. It is salvageable, so I'm not putting it up for a VFD, and it's not that important an article - but it does still need a rewrite. Mysticaloctopus 21:06, 31 March 2007 (UTC)Reply

I'm deleting the weasel words and the unverified allegation that the project is being continued in secret. I won't have a problem if the user backs the statement up with a good, verifiable resource, but for now there is none so it should be removed. --Edwin Herdman 10:30, 6 May 2007 (UTC)Reply
Update - I actually need some more time to get a handle on this. The Jane's article is the source for the so-called "weasel words;" they may still be weasel words but they weren't invented here - Jane's is at least reasonably well respected, after all! I'll look at conducting a rewrite soon. --Edwin Herdman 10:52, 6 May 2007 (UTC)Reply