Talk:She's a Mess

Latest comment: 12 years ago by Till I Go Home in topic Non-neutral wording
Former good articleShe's a Mess was one of the Music good articles, but it has been removed from the list. There are suggestions below for improving the article to meet the good article criteria. Once these issues have been addressed, the article can be renominated. Editors may also seek a reassessment of the decision if they believe there was a mistake.
Article milestones
DateProcessResult
June 2, 2012Good article nomineeListed
January 27, 2013Articles for deletionMerged
Did You Know
A fact from this article appeared on Wikipedia's Main Page in the "Did you know?" column on May 25, 2012.
The text of the entry was: Did you know ... that "She's a Mess", a song by English girl group Sugababes from their seventh studio album, had to be renamed because the band felt the lyrics were promoting binge drinking?
Current status: Delisted good article

Non-neutral wording

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The sentence "The song contain's excessive use of the Autotune feature." violates WP:NPOV. "Excessive use" is clearly an opinion; if that phrase is going to stay, you need to put it in context and quote who said it. Otherwise, you need to document that the song does in fact use Autotune, and not any of a number of methods to get electronic-sounding vocals in a studio. (Also: no apostrophe in "contains".) BlueMoonset (talk) 14:39, 23 May 2012 (UTC)Reply

  Done Changed. Till I Go Home (talk) 08:20, 24 May 2012 (UTC)Reply