Talk:Shades of Cool/GA1

GA Review

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Reviewer: IndianBio (talk · contribs) 10:10, 1 June 2015 (UTC)

• .. including Greece and France --> there's also Belgium and Spain I can see and possibly Italy

• Done Simon (talk) 08:39, 3 June 2015 (UTC)

• Del Rey's vocals span from A3 to B5 --> You can follow this with the chord progression from Musicnotes

• I don't know much about this. Simon (talk) 08:39, 3 June 2015 (UTC)

• Her "operatic" soprano blending --> It is not clear whether you are talking about her vocals or a blending machine (for the uninitiated) rephrase

• Done Simon (talk) 08:39, 3 June 2015 (UTC)

• Colin Stutz's review would be better if you make it a passive voice and not direct quote. It would be better understandable

• Done Simon (talk) 08:39, 3 June 2015 (UTC)

• The single line lyrics are not needed, make them write it in a sentence.

• Done Simon (talk) 08:39, 3 June 2015 (UTC)

• from MTV News called it "fifty shades of great" --> What does it mean? Would probably need a rephrasing

• The review was quite vague so I removed the information. Simon (talk) 08:39, 3 June 2015 (UTC)

• Chris Coplan of Consequence of Sound --> You gave the full name just in the above section

• Done Simon (talk) 08:39, 3 June 2015 (UTC)

• to a James Bond theme track --> in a James Bond theme track

• Done Simon (talk) 08:39, 3 June 2015 (UTC)

• observing that "Del Rey has never sounded better." --> Incomplete sentence, so period should be outside quote

• Done Simon (talk) 08:39, 3 June 2015 (UTC)

• The single was a top ten hit in Greece, peaking at number three on the Greece Digital Songs --> You need to mention this is Billboard Greece Digital Songs and not the one from IFPI Greece

• Clarified. Simon (talk) 08:39, 3 June 2015 (UTC)

• The version, in which Del Rey is seen dead, was described as "darker" than the original video --> This version, in which Del Rey is seen dead, was described as "darker" than the original video. Also there needs to be further expansion on why Del Rey is dead in the video.

• Fixed the → this. Simon (talk) 08:39, 3 June 2015 (UTC)

• Ref 24, the FIMI link does not work. I know how to verify the chart position since that link is impossible to generate.

Short good article, on hold for seven days and this is an easy GA. —Indian:BIO ^{[ ChitChat ]} 10:10, 1 June 2015 (UTC)

Passing since concerns have been addressed. —Indian:BIO ^{[ ChitChat ]} 13:27, 3 June 2015 (UTC)