Talk:Self-tying shoes
Latest comment: 6 months ago by Bricology in topic Outdated phrasing needs correction
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Outdated phrasing needs correction edit
Under the heading "Manufacturers: Nike", the second paragraph begins "In March 2016, at a press event in New York, Nike unveiled its self-tying shoe to market, the HyperAdapt 1.0, which is scheduled to hit store shelves in select Nike locations on November 28.' (emphasis added) As of this writing, seven years have passed, so stating this in the future tense is nonsensical (and "hit" is an unencyclopedic term). Any suggestions for how this might be correctly restated? Bricology (talk) 09:29, 6 November 2023 (UTC)