Talk:Sean Meenan

Latest comment: 2 years ago by 2601:647:4F00:113A:F9DD:C415:2F20:7644 in topic Promotional tone

Promotional tone edit

This article reads like it was written by the subject, as a resume or a pitch for investors. For example:

"He had always worked in either film or restaurants before opening his own."

This sentence doesn't have any relevance for the reader of a general encyclopedia - it reads as an attempt to reassure listeners that someone is competent and/or authentic.

The whole article reads in this way, so I'm not comfortable fixing it on my own. I'm also concerned that this article is as long and detailed as it is. Lloannna (talk) 01:10, 9 February 2022 (UTC)Reply

This is a PR screed for a brain-dead commie pinhead. He's not welcome in Miami, for good reason. — Preceding unsigned comment added by 2601:647:4F00:113A:F9DD:C415:2F20:7644 (talk) 01:43, 9 February 2022 (UTC)Reply