Talk:Scream (Usher song)/GA1

GA Review

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Reviewer: Calvin999 (talk · contribs) 23:37, 13 June 2013 (UTC)

• and ballads elements. → This doesn't quite make sense. Maybe elements of balladry would sound better.

 Done Re-written.

• its musical elements to that → Not the right word, use structure or composition instead of elements. Elements would be a specific part, but the critic is generalising.

 Done Re-written.

• produced and wrote "Scream" along with Usher and Savan Kotecha. → Implies that Usher and Savan also produced it.

 Done Re-written.

• recorded in MXM → recorded at MXM

 Done

• Link mixing

 Done

• I think you should mention Pop and Adult Pop in the Chart performance

 Done

• The song was performed during E3 2012 to promote Dance Central 3 in which Usher performed choreography portrayed in the video game to the attendees. → Need a source

 Done

• a Dead link needs tending to

 Done

Status

A well written article, I like this song :-). On hold.  — AARON • ^TALK 22:32, 19 June 2013 (UTC)

Thanks for the review, everything should be sorted. I also like this song :D. Et3rnal 18:45, 20 June 2013 (UTC)

Passing.  — AARON • ^TALK 18:50, 20 June 2013 (UTC)

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