Talk:Sam Quek

GA Review

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Reviewer: Bait30 (talk · contribs) 20:27, 22 October 2020 (UTC)

Hi, I'll be reviewing this within the next week.  Bait30  ^{Talk 2 me pls?} 20:27, 22 October 2020 (UTC)

Lead

• Lead looks good to me.

Early life

• "(then) independent": should probably just be removed. I'm not sure this extra info about the school is useful in an article about Quek. Removing it would also fix a MOS:SEAOFBLUE issue. (3b)

• Amended. I also removed "in Birkenhead" after "Birkenhead High School". BennyOnTheLoose (talk) 08:56, 26 October 2020 (UTC)

Career

• "and a few months later": I'm not sure what happened here because this is a new sentence, but it starts lowercase and with a coordinating conjunction. (1a)
• "In 2020, she was announced...": saying that she was announced makes it seem like it hasn't happened yet, but later on it says she finished as a runner up. Should be reworded to be less confusing. (1a)

• I've made those amendments. and some other small copyedits to the section. I've also changed the Celebrity Masterchef reference to one that shows she reached the final. BennyOnTheLoose (talk) 09:12, 26 October 2020 (UTC)

Personal life

• seems good to me.

Images

• Images are relevant and appropriately tagged.
• For the Quek vs Argentina photo, I would recommend mentioning that Quek is the one on the right. (6b)

• Amended the caption. BennyOnTheLoose (talk) 09:15, 26 October 2020 (UTC)

I'm done with the prose. I will review the references very soon.  Bait30  ^{Talk 2 me pls?} 01:10, 26 October 2020 (UTC)

References

• All good.

 Bait30  ^{Talk 2 me pls?} 02:54, 26 October 2020 (UTC)

Thanks for taking on the review and for your constructive comments, Bait30. Hopefully I've addressed your points; let me know if there is anything else to be done. Regards, BennyOnTheLoose (talk) 09:18, 26 October 2020 (UTC)

Checklist so far

GA review (see here for what the criteria are, and here for what they are not)

1. It is reasonably well written.

   a (prose, spelling, and grammar): b (MoS for lead, layout, word choice, fiction, and lists):

2. It is factually accurate and verifiable.

   a (reference section): b (citations to reliable sources): c (OR): d (copyvio and plagiarism):

3. It is broad in its coverage.

   a (major aspects): b (focused):

4. It follows the neutral point of view policy.

   Fair representation without bias:

5. It is stable.

   No edit wars, etc.:

6. It is illustrated by images and other media, where possible and appropriate.

   a (images are tagged and non-free content have fair use rationales): b (appropriate use with suitable captions):

7. Overall:

   Pass/Fail:

Did you know nomination

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The result was: promoted by Yoninah (talk) 23:04, 9 November 2020 (UTC)

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Sam Quek at the 2015 EuroHockey Championship

• ... that Sam Quek (pictured) played in every game of the 2014 Women's Hockey Champions Trophy despite breaking two ribs in the opening match? Source: During the Champions Trophy in 2014, she broke two ribs during England's opener against Australia. But she played on, featuring in all five of her team's remaining matches as England finished fifth in Mendoza, Argentina.

• Reviewed: Template:Did you know nominations/Disappearance of Nicole Morin

Improved to Good Article status by BennyOnTheLoose (talk). Nominated by Bait30 (talk) at 03:59, 31 October 2020 (UTC).

General: Article is new enough and long enough
New enough: Long enough:

Policy: Article is sourced, neutral, and free of copyright problems
Adequate sourcing: Neutral: Free of copyright violations, plagiarism, and close paraphrasing:

Hook: Hook has been verified by provided inline citation
Cited: Interesting:

Image: Image is freely licensed, used in the article, and clear at 100px.
Freely licensed: Used in article: Clear at 100px:

QPQ: Done.

Overall:

• The article was brought to GA status within seven days from the nomination. It is long enough, neutral and well-sourced. Earwig found one problematic website but it seems to be a direct copy form the article itself. The hook is within the character limit, it's content is interesting and is backed up by a reliable inline citation. QPQ also done. Image is published under a cc licence, used in the article and clear. I think this is good to go. Modussiccandi (talk) 20:59, 1 November 2020 (UTC)

Children

She announced pregnant with 2nd child October 2021. And another section says was on WWTBAM Nov 2021 just 7 days after giving birth. Seems strange announcing pregnancy at 8.5 months. 92.234.248.213 (talk) 21:17, 4 March 2022 (UTC)