Talk:Salvatore Contorno

Speculating about the subject's mental state edit

Even though this reversion added a citation, I still have issues with the phrase "mentally the streetwise ruffian remained a mafioso, which is the only reality he knows." This should be re-worded to reflect that it is someone's (published) opinion rather than a verifiable fact. Nick Number (talk) 19:12, 18 November 2011 (UTC)Reply

I think the phrase is clear if you read it in the context of the paragraph. Nevertheless, I added a quote to clarify it even further. I hope this addresses your concerns. - DonCalo (talk) 10:56, 19 November 2011 (UTC)Reply