Talk:SMS Oldenburg

Latest comment: 13 years ago by AirplanePro in topic GA Review
Featured articleSMS Oldenburg is a featured article; it (or a previous version of it) has been identified as one of the best articles produced by the Wikipedia community. Even so, if you can update or improve it, please do so.
Featured topic starSMS Oldenburg is part of the Battleships of Germany series, a featured topic. This is identified as among the best series of articles produced by the Wikipedia community. If you can update or improve it, please do so.
Main Page trophyThis article appeared on Wikipedia's Main Page as Today's featured article on February 1, 2022.
Did You Know Article milestones
DateProcessResult
January 26, 2011Good article nomineeListed
February 18, 2011Good topic candidatePromoted
August 25, 2011Good topic candidatePromoted
January 9, 2013WikiProject A-class reviewApproved
June 30, 2013Featured article candidatePromoted
Did You Know A fact from this article appeared on Wikipedia's Main Page in the "Did you know?" column on January 18, 2011.
The text of the entry was: Did you know ... that the construction of the German dreadnought battleship Oldenburg sparked a major escalation in the international naval arms race before World War I?
Current status: Featured article

GA Review edit

This review is transcluded from Talk:SMS Oldenburg (1910)/GA1. The edit link for this section can be used to add comments to the review.

Reviewer: WikiCopter (simplecommonslostcvuonau) 04:42, 17 January 2011 (UTC)Reply

I still remember you doing the same favor to me, months ago. Now here I am to review your article. I will begin review in a while. WikiCopter (simplecommonslostcvuonau) 04:42, 17 January 2011 (UTC)Reply

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    • Two of your images need or have but need more descriptive alt text (see here). WikiCopter (simplecommonslostcvuonau) 04:51, 17 January 2011 (UTC)Reply
    • Before she was sunk, Fortune scored a single hit on Oldenburg with her 4 inch guns. [...] In the darkness, Fortune and Ardent were sunk and the remaining four ships were scattered.. Something is redundant. You said Fortune was sunk twice (or twice you said Fortune was sunk). WikiCopter (simplecommonslostcvuonau) 04:53, 17 January 2011 (UTC)Reply
      • Thanks for reviewing the article. I fixed both problems you pointed out. Parsecboy (talk) 14:41, 17 January 2011 (UTC)Reply
        • Sorry to jump in on this review, I have a couple of comments (not very major). I added them to your talkpage, but I think they might have got lost amongst subsequent posts. The diff is here: [1]. Regards, AustralianRupert (talk) 23:44, 18 January 2011 (UTC)Reply