Talk:SMS Amazone

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December 21, 2012	Good article nominee	Listed
March 16, 2014	Good topic candidate	Promoted

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GA Review edit

Latest comment: 11 years ago5 comments2 people in discussion

This review is transcluded from Talk:SMS Amazone/GA1. The edit link for this section can be used to add comments to the review.

Reviewer: ChrisGualtieri (talk · contribs) 16:02, 12 December 2012 (UTC)Reply

I'll be reviewing this soon. ChrisGualtieri (talk) 16:02, 12 December 2012 (UTC)Reply

Found a mistake in lede. 'World was I' fixed to World War I Term 'elderly' in removed from service history. Awkward as 'elderly light cruisers'.

One issue remains with this sentence, "Then-Korvettenkapitän Alfred Saalwächter, later a senior admiral during World War II, took command of the ship in 1926" It doesn't read well.

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Putting it on hold to address that one issue. Its trivial, but you can write better prose then I. ChrisGualtieri (talk) 05:18, 19 December 2012 (UTC)Reply

Thanks again, Chris - I rephrased the sentence in question, how does it read now? Parsecboy (talk) 11:06, 19 December 2012 (UTC)Reply

Yep passed. Other issue was fixed yesterday by me as well. ChrisGualtieri (talk) 04:03, 21 December 2012 (UTC)Reply

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