Overhaul of this article edit

I am the wiki article manager of RYTHEM's Tiki (Tokyo Night's Wiki) Page. I would like to transfer my translations and layout over to this wikipedia article but would like some input from others before I make the changes. Any comments and or advice is welcome as I am still new to Wikipedia's rules and regulations on this kind of transfer. ~ DarkS Umbreon 14:11, 29 May 2007 (UTC)Reply

First of all, thanks for giving this page a biography. However, the style of writing is quite informal and subjective. Please refer to the Wikipedia's writing guide, especially the "Information Style and Tone" section (Section 2). I leave the decision to edit your writing on your hands, since I feel that's appropriate.
User:HoshiHana has given a good example to separate the discography from the biography itself, given their discography will grow quite significantly (or so I hope :D). 193.136.122.18 14:35, 20 June 2007 (UTC)Reply
Okay, thanks for the heads up. I'll have a go rephrasing the text but since it's an open encyclopaedia any help in this is welcome. ~ DarkS Umbreon 11:23, 29 June 2007 (UTC)Reply

Alphabetical List edit

I personally don't think there's a need for the alphabetical listing of the songs as they should be listed in the discography. Another point to consider is that the alphabetical list does not contain the songs which are yet to be released, and those which were never released but were aired on "Enjoy Your Time!". I will remove the list unless there's a legitimate reason to keep it. DarkS Umbreon 09:10, 20 September 2007 (UTC)Reply

I second that. Furthermore, it is better to insert the song list in the discography, according to the singles/albums. 141.30.217.10 20:39, 14 October 2007 (UTC)Reply
I will fix that up, once my schedule clears up a bit. The only thing that may remain on the list are the songs that were only released electronically and on their radio program. ~ DarkS Umbreon (talk) 06:22, 22 December 2007 (UTC)Reply

Fair use rationale for Image:Rythem03.jpg edit

 

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BetacommandBot (talk) 04:55, 24 January 2008 (UTC)Reply