Talk:Robert Thomas (ice hockey)

Latest comment: 3 years ago by Nova Crystallis in topic GA Review

GA Review edit

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Reviewer: Nova Crystallis (talk · contribs) 17:47, 25 May 2020 (UTC)Reply


Reviewing later. Nova Crystallis (Talk) 17:47, 25 May 2020 (UTC)Reply

  • "As the youngest player on the Blues' roster, Thomas won the Stanley Cup as a member of the team in 2019." Remove "as a member of the team", it's already stated with him being on the roster.  Done
  • Ref 2 doesn't say his dad is a chef.  Done
  • "under 16" Dash needed.  Done
  • Link Fortnite and link Jordan Kyrou earlier.  Done
  • "attend Canada men's national junior ice hockey team U20 Team Summer Development Camp " A "the" can be added after the "and".
  • "Blues prospects Jordan Kyrou" Singular.   Done
  • Missing a dot for the ellipsis in the player profile quote.  Done

That should be it. Nova Crystallis (Talk) 06:11, 26 May 2020 (UTC)Reply