Talk:Reproductive coevolution in Ficus

Latest comment: 7 years ago by Chris6734 in topic Peer Review

Peer Review edit

Great job getting in so much detail in such a concise manner! You seem pretty knowledgeable about your topic, so there are some areas like the cospeciation where I got lost in because the explanation wasn't that clear to me. Try to reword and carefully explain what is going on with their genes and such. Also, your example in the last section seemed rushed and I didn't really see how it related back to your topic at hand or how it added any substantial information. Overall, it looks like you're going in the right direction with your article, just try to write as if you are teaching this subject to a freshman biology class because these pages are meant to provide basic and understandable knowledge. Chris6734 (talk) 04:18, 16 November 2016 (UTC)Reply