Talk:Rentap

Latest comment: 6 years ago by Reidgreg in topic May 2017 copyedit

Quote - Agi idup, agi ngelaban edit

Can someone mention the quote "Agi idup, agi ngelaban" here? It means "Fight to your death" or literally "As long as you live, fight". It's quoted in many places but there's no definite source.

Blogs and .Txt's edit

These are not reliable citations per the guidelines and pretty much what this whole entry is based on.--AhmedFaizP (talk) 20:07, 4 January 2016 (UTC)Reply

May 2017 copyedit edit

This article is a historical biography, but the article seemed to be trying to cover the entire historical period, with sections that didn't even mention the article's subject. I made some cuts to keep the article concise and on-subject. Shorter articles are easier to absorb, and I hope this cleared up a lot of the article's issues. If, however, anyone wants to revive the earlier material for an article on the historical period, just check the page history prior to the date with my signature (below). I'm sure this can still be improved upon, but I've been staring at it for too long. If anyone has questions or comments on my copyedit, feel free to post here. – Reidgreg (talk) 22:41, 18 May 2017 (UTC)Reply