Talk:Remember the Name (Ed Sheeran song)/GA1
Latest comment: 1 year ago by AryKun in topic GA Review
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Reviewer: AryKun (talk · contribs) 11:06, 12 May 2022 (UTC)
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- Thank you, AK. Ping for MarioSoulTruthFan since it doesn't seem Legobot notified him.--NØ 12:00, 12 May 2022 (UTC)
- Any updates on this, AryKun?--NØ 14:33, 24 May 2022 (UTC)
- @AryKun: I'm not sure if you forgot about this but if there are no updates here soon I will have to take this to WT:GAN for a second opinion.--NØ 20:06, 1 June 2022 (UTC)
- He is taking care of another review. Don't worry. MarioSoulTruthFan (talk) 20:39, 1 June 2022 (UTC)
- That's fine by me but I would like an acknowledgement that they will do this review. 21 days of waiting are definitely out of the ordinary...--NØ 20:43, 1 June 2022 (UTC)
- True, if I'm not mistaken the reviewer is involved in the wikicup. It might have to do with that. MarioSoulTruthFan (talk) 22:37, 1 June 2022 (UTC)
- That's fine by me but I would like an acknowledgement that they will do this review. 21 days of waiting are definitely out of the ordinary...--NØ 20:43, 1 June 2022 (UTC)
- He is taking care of another review. Don't worry. MarioSoulTruthFan (talk) 20:39, 1 June 2022 (UTC)
- Very, very, very sorry about the delay in this, I had some irl stuff that means I haven't really been too active on Wikipedia the last week. I will get to this today as soon as I get time. AryKun (talk) 03:39, 2 June 2022 (UTC)
Review edit
Lead edit
- "The hip hop song" → "hip hop" could be linked and is better placed in the previous sentence as "is a hip hop song by"
- "the latter five received" → " with the latter five receiving"
- "due to the words" → " due to the usage of words"
- 'highlighted "Dr. Dre's inspired production"' → "highlighted the Dr. Dre-inspired production"
- ", while numerous reviewers" → ", with numerous reviewers"
- "the song among" → "the song as being among"
- "It charted in various countries, including in the top ten of New Zealand, Slovakia and it peaked at number three on UK R&B chart." → "It charted in various countries, including in the top ten of New Zealand and Slovakia, and peaked at number three on the UK R&B chart."
- Add a link to music certification.
Background edit
- "Eminem's manager" → First mention of Em in body, so should be linked.
- "proved his detractors" → "proved that his detractors"
- "I had fun doing it we got some heat" → I think a sic tag after this is needed.
Production edit
- "was engineered" → Link to sound engineering.
- "latter studios" → I understand this means the last two? "latter two studios" would then be clearer.
Composition and lyrical interpretation edit
- "town Ipswich" → "town of Ipswich"
- 'on "Remember the Name"' → This phrase is unnecessary, as it's implied that we're talking about the song in this article
- "intricate rhymes schemes" → "intricate rhyme schemes"
- "insist that "it’s ‘bout time you remember the name." → Quote within a quote should have single-quotes.
Release and reception edit
- I've copyedited this section, feel free to point out any changes you might disagree with.
- "Andy Cush .. these days". → This entire part is based not on a review, but on an article written before the release of the album anticipating what the song might have. As such, it should be removed.
- "Graff continued ... Ipswich'." → This sentence doesn't make sense and should be removed, it's a sarcastic comment that can't really be incorporated here.
Chart performance edit
- The acronyms BPI and MC aren't used again and so don't need to be mentioned.
References and images edit
- References are reliable and consistently formatted.
- Spot-checks on refs 10, 11, 12, 18, and 21 found that they supported the claims made. Permalink for ref numbers
- The sole image used seems to be licensed correctly.
- Perhaps you could add another image, maybe one of the singers, to reduce the text heavy feel of the article. AryKun (talk) 05:31, 6 June 2022 (UTC)