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Neutral POV edit
This article appears to lack NPOV and reads somewhat like an advertisement. I have removed some links and edited the text to tone it down somewhat. Elliott Shultz (talk) 19:08, 1 April 2008 (UTC)
Thanks for your edit, the previous version did indeed read rather strangely. I have however undone some of your deletions, in which I don't see the advertisement character. I've also re-upped the links, as (correct me if I'm wrong) listing advertising-type material in the "see also" is ok.Michi zh (talk) 09:27, 2 October 2008 (UTC)