Talk:Rainham, London/GA3
Latest comment: 16 years ago by Epbr123 in topic GA review
GA review edit
The article is well written and will pass once the following have been fixed:
- Please provide a Fair Use Rationale for the Rainham Casino image.
Done Max Naylor 08:08, 26 May 2007 (UTC) - The every paragraph in the History section needs at least one citation.
- There is an overuse of wikilinking throughout the article. Links to common words like food, pebbles, glass, schoolchildren etc. should be removed.
- Can anymore be added to the history section on the 17th to 19th centuries?
- All sources of history information have been exhausted, unfortunately. Max Naylor 08:08, 26 May 2007 (UTC)
- The years in the History section should either all be linked or all be unlinked. Done Max Naylor 08:08, 26 May 2007 (UTC)
- It should be made clearer what product is made by Tilda Rice (I assume it's rice). Done Max Naylor 08:08, 26 May 2007 (UTC)
- Lists are discouraged in town articles. The list of schools should be made into prose, with maybe a brief description of each of the secondary schools.
- The phrase "dumping ground" should be replaced by something more encyclopedic
- Any suggestions? Max Naylor 08:08, 26 May 2007 (UTC)
- The Commerce section could be renamed Economy, and could incorporate the Future section.
- I’m not sure about this; the information in the future section is not really relevant to Rainham’s economy. Max Naylor 08:08, 26 May 2007 (UTC)
- Are there any sports teams, museums, landmarks, etc. which could make up a Culture section?
- Unfortunately there aren’t really any sports teams, and the closest thing to a museum is Rainham Library. Max Naylor 08:08, 26 May 2007 (UTC)
Let me know once these have been fixed or if you disagree with any. The article's GA review will be placed on hold for a maximum of seven days. Thanks. Epbr123 10:34, 25 May 2007 (UTC)