Talk:Rad Mobile

Latest comment: 5 years ago by TarkusAB in topic GA Review

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BetacommandBot (talk) 03:52, 24 January 2008 (UTC)Reply

Source search edit

  • Beep 1991/4 Page 123 and 130
    • Per this source, I would give credit to Hisao Oguchi and Sega AM3 per page 123. In an interview with Oguchi, he is credited as head of Sega AM3 (第三AM究開発部 小口久雄部長). And although the interview is primarily about Super Monaco GP, towards the end of the interview he says: "最近、32ビットのチップを搭載し、新しいポードを使った、「ラッドモビール」というゲームを作ったんですが、" which means "Recently we made a new game called Rad Mobile which uses a 32 bit chip and a new pod."
  • MegaDrive Fan 1991/4 Page 112-113
  • MegaDrive FAn 1991/5 Page 129
  • Beep 1991/5 Page 124-125, 127

TarkusABtalk 22:55, 18 January 2019 (UTC)Reply

@TarkusAB: That's awesome. I'll throw that one in; unfortunately I can't read Japanese so I can't help parse the rest. While I have you here, do you think you could provide Hepburn transliterations of the two Japanese titles in the footnotes? It's a little thing that would be helpful. Red Phoenix talk 01:05, 19 January 2019 (UTC)Reply
Added! TarkusABtalk 01:19, 19 January 2019 (UTC)Reply

GA Review edit

This review is transcluded from Talk:Rad Mobile/GA1. The edit link for this section can be used to add comments to the review.

Reviewer: TarkusAB (talk · contribs) 20:32, 26 January 2019 (UTC)Reply


I'll review it. TarkusABtalk 20:32, 26 January 2019 (UTC)Reply

  • Since we have two scores (Sinclair and Beep), maybe put them in a reception score box?
  • Just want to make sure, Takashi Yuda is being credited for design on Gale Racer. Are we talking game design or graphic design? Usually the Japanese mean art when they say design, while English sources mean game design when they say it.
  • You should write out "Computer and Video Games"
  • "Horowitz noting that based" Noting should not be used here, use another word like "believing" or "feeling" because it's an opinion.
  • Did you check page 71 in Raze #7? There is some small coverage there if it's of any use. [1]
    • Aside from the fact that Takashi Yuda's role is not specific in the source (the source just calls him "the designer"), all concerns have been addressed. Red Phoenix talk 13:29, 28 January 2019 (UTC)Reply
@Red Phoenix: Pass but remove the scores from prose now that they're in an infobox. TarkusABtalk 17:10, 28 January 2019 (UTC)Reply