Talk:Quiero (Ricardo Arjona song)/GA1

Latest comment: 11 years ago by Status in topic GA Review

GA Review edit

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Reviewer: Status (talk · contribs) 19:55, 6 January 2013 (UTC)Reply

Good articles. Just a few issues:

  • Written and performed by Arjona → Saying that he "performed" the song again is redundant.
  • Quotes need to be referenced in the lead.
  • The background section relies too much on quotes. Try re-writing some in your own words.
  • In 2009, "Quiero" was awarded, along with other selected songs, the Pop/Ballad Songs of the year award by the American Society of Composers, Authors and Publishers. → Unsourced
  • Promotion headline is pointless.
  • The video being filmed and premiering doesn't really work into the same sentence.
  • As of 21 December 2012, the video has reached 3.4 million views on YouTube. → Not sure about the inclusion of this.
  • Ref 1: Taken from the album booklet. → Unneeded
  • Ref 4 reads more like a note than a reference.
  • I don't see any citations (or information in the body) about a single release?
    I am still unable to find it. Although, Billboard only includes songs that are released as singles for the Latin Songs and Latin Pop Songs charts, and also, it received a music video. This is enough proof (in my opinion, and talking about Arjona's past) that it is indeed a single :) — ΛΧΣ21 23:46, 6 January 2013 (UTC)Reply

 — Statυs (talk, contribs) 19:55, 6 January 2013 (UTC)Reply

  • I have fixed all. Thanks :) — ΛΧΣ21 23:46, 6 January 2013 (UTC)Reply
    Now that everything has been resolved, I feel confident in passing the article.  — Statυs (talk, contribs) 00:03, 7 January 2013 (UTC)Reply
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