Talk:Quantum discord
Latest comment: 9 years ago by Steelpillow in topic Weird language: “poignant”
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Weird language: “poignant” edit
This sounds strange: “Evidence has been provided for poignant differences between the properties of quantum entanglement and quantum discord”, but I am wary of using “significant” in case I am missing something. Moreover “Evidence has been provided” sounds unnecessarily cagey; “Significant differences have been observed” or even “There are significant differences”. Finally, “the properties of” seems superfluous and could probably be excised. Perhaps someone more familiar with the subject has the confidence to improve this. PJTraill (talk) 12:19, 17 September 2014 (UTC)
- Plain Englsh now substituted. Reading on, I have an uncomfortable susipicion thsat there is some copyvio lurking around here. — Cheers, Steelpillow (Talk) 21:45, 17 September 2014 (UTC)