Talk:Post-convergent

Latest comment: 10 years ago by Jaytwist in topic Needs Clean-up

Scholarly edit

I'm a moderately-educated, moderately intelligent encyclopedia reader, and I can't make head nor tail of this article. I would have to be a practiced reader of some very highly specialized material to even begin to. I would suggest that all the scholarly references aren't necessary and should be left out at least until the writer has managed to make this article reasonably understandable to a non-specialist audience, and I further suggest that that would make a good definition of what an encyclopedia article should be. As it stands, this is a scholarly article and not an encyclopedia article.

Needs Clean-up edit

According to the title, this article should be about the term "post-convergent" but as written it spends most of its time discussing 3D Multi-User Virtual Environments. These may be an example of a post-convergent medium, but they are not the topic itself. I would encourage editors who have a deeper understanding of "post-convergent" to refocus this article appropriately. Jaytwist (talk) 22:43, 11 June 2013 (UTC)Reply