Talk:Poole–Frenkel effect

Latest comment: 3 years ago by Majorett in topic Observations and suggestions for improvements

Poole-Frenkel equation edit

I would add some more references to indicate where all the main formulas were taken from (even if it may be a repetition of the same citation). --Laurona94 (talk) 14:53, 26 June 2020 (UTC)Reply

See also edit

Very good job, interesting topic. You may add the See also section, with some correlated Wikipedia pages.

Best regards, --Msalerno95 (talk) 14:14, 26 June 2020 (UTC)Reply

Observations and suggestions for improvements edit

The following observations and suggestions for improvements were collected, following expert review of the article within the Science, Tecnology, Society and Wikipedia course at the Politecnico di Milano, in June 2020.

Overall clarity and language can be improved.

Suggestions:

  1. Perhaps the word "model" is more appropriate than "means" to describe the Pool-Frenkel effect. A possible definition may sound like: "The Poole-Frenkel effect is a model describing the mechanism of trap-assisted electron transport in ....";
  2. Avoid the use of "get" throughout the article;
  3. Some abbreviations are of standard use, for example, zero-field, field-independent, and so on;
  4. Carefully review some verbs, foe example, "confronting" should be replaced by "comparing", etc..

Majorett (talk) 20:59, 18 July 2020 (UTC)Reply