Talk:Pelagic stingray/GA1
Latest comment: 14 years ago by Yzx in topic GA Review
GA Review
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Reviewer: Xtzou (Talk) 20:12, 9 April 2010 (UTC)
- This is a wonderful article, accessible to a non specialist like me. I learned a lot. Great pictures to illustrate your points. I have a question about one sentence:
- "As a consequence of its midwater habits, it has evolved to swim with more of a flapping motion of its pectoral fins" ... This sounds like evolution is directed, that the midwater habits caused the "wim with more of a flapping motion".
- Changed to passive voice.
- Also, do you mean "midwater habits" or "midwater habitat"?
- "Habits"
Best, Xtzou (Talk) 20:12, 9 April 2010 (UTC)
GA review – see WP:WIAGA for criteria
- Is it reasonably well written?
- A. Prose quality:
- B. MoS compliance:
- A. Prose quality:
- Is it factually accurate and verifiable?
- A. References to sources:
- B. Citation of reliable sources where necessary:
- C. No original research:
- A. References to sources:
- Is it broad in its coverage?
- A. Major aspects:
- B. Focused:
- A. Major aspects:
- Is it neutral?
- Fair representation without bias:
- Fair representation without bias:
- Is it stable?
- No edit wars, etc:
- No edit wars, etc:
- Does it contain images to illustrate the topic?
- A. Images are copyright tagged, and non-free images have fair use rationales:
- B. Images are provided where possible and appropriate, with suitable captions:
- A. Images are copyright tagged, and non-free images have fair use rationales:
- Overall:
- Pass or Fail: Pass!
- Pass or Fail: Pass!
Congratulations! A fine article and a pleasure to read. I believe you have worked hard to produce such a well written article that follows the major MoS guidelines. Xtzou (Talk) 23:34, 9 April 2010 (UTC)