Talk:Peachtree Arcade

Latest comment: 1 year ago by Sammi Brie in topic GA Review

Did you know nomination edit

The following is an archived discussion of the DYK nomination of the article below. Please do not modify this page. Subsequent comments should be made on the appropriate discussion page (such as this nomination's talk page, the article's talk page or Wikipedia talk:Did you know), unless there is consensus to re-open the discussion at this page. No further edits should be made to this page.

The result was: promoted by Theleekycauldron (talk) 10:09, 3 September 2022 (UTC)Reply

5x expanded by JJonahJackalope (talk). Self-nominated at 19:28, 6 August 2022 (UTC).Reply

  •   Hi JJonahJackalope, review follows: article more than 5x expanded on 6 August; article is well written and cited inline throughout to reliable sources; I can't access all of the sources but I found no issues with overly close paraphrasing in a random spotcheck; hooks are interesting enough for me, preference for ALT0 as is more about the arcade; I can verify ALT0, happy to AGF on ALT1; a QPQ has been carried out. Looks fine to me - Dumelow (talk) 07:26, 10 August 2022 (UTC)Reply

GA Review edit

The following discussion is closed. Please do not modify it. Subsequent comments should be made on the appropriate discussion page. No further edits should be made to this discussion.


This review is transcluded from Talk:Peachtree Arcade/GA1. The edit link for this section can be used to add comments to the review.

Reviewer: Sammi Brie (talk · contribs) 03:58, 8 September 2022 (UTC)Reply

Almost there. JJonahJackalope won't have much to do. 7-day hold. Sammi Brie (she/her • tc) 04:17, 8 September 2022 (UTC)Reply

Copy changes edit

Site prior to the arcade edit

  • Should it be "Dougherties" or "Doughertys"?
    • Changed to "Doughertys".
  • That same decade, the three-story Concert Hall Building, which served as barracks and a prison during the American Civil War. This is an incomplete sentence missing a subject.
    • Fixed incomplete sentence.
  • On the National Hotel... I agree with the 1902 date, having looked this up. An "old National Hotel building" is mentioned as being destroyed in a major fire that struck downtown Atlanta on December 9, 1902, having become the Snook & Austin furniture building at that time. See paragraph 4 of this clipping[1] or the second linked page in this one:[2]
  • In 1901, a viaduct was constructed for Peachtree Street over the railroad tracks that improved pedestrian mobility in the area The way this is written, the railroad tracks improved mobility?. Maybe In 1901, a viaduct was constructed for Peachtree Street over the railroad tracks, improving pedestrian mobility in the area
    • Done.

Other items edit

  • Add alt text to the images. (Not a GAN requirement, but something I generally suggest while you're here.) Two PD and one CC0 image.
    • Added alt text.
  • References are archived where applicable.
  • Earwig mostly flags book titles; no issues.
  • Sammi Brie, just wanted to ping you to let you know that I have made some edits to the article to address your comments in this review. Thank you for initiating this review, and if you have any further questions, comments, or concerns, please let me know. -JJonahJackalope (talk) 01:25, 9 September 2022 (UTC)Reply
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  1. ^ "Detail Loss as Estimated by the Owners". The Atlanta Constitution. Atlanta, Georgia. December 10, 1902. p. 2:1, 2. Retrieved September 8, 2022 – via Newspapers.com.
  2. ^ "Half Million Goes Up In Smoke". The Macon News. Macon, Georgia. December 9, 1902. p. 1, 4. Retrieved September 8, 2022 – via Newspapers.com.