Talk:Paul Bako/GA1

GA Review

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Reviewer: Giants27(Contribs|WP:CFL) 03:30, 8 November 2009 (UTC)

1. Well written?:

Prose quality:

• After playing 13 games with the Toledo Mud Hens in 1998, Bako was called up to the Detroit Tigers. I thought he was on the Reds? How'd he join the Tigers organization?
• and he was part of Houston's roster for the 1997 National League Division Series, but did not play. After the season, the Tigers traded Bako to the Houston Astros in a seven-player deal that included Brad Ausmus. This is confusing since it says he was inactive for the Astros playoff team but was traded after the season. Please clarify this.
• Bako returned to the majors with the Kansas City Royals. As a free agent, I'd assume.

Manual of Style compliance:

2. Factually accurate and verifiable?:

References to sources:

Citations to reliable sources, where required:

No original research:

3. Broad in coverage?:

Major aspects:

Focused:

4. Reflects a neutral point of view?:

Fair representation without bias:

5. Reasonably stable?

No edit wars, etc. (Vandalism does not count against GA):

6. Illustrated by images, when possible and appropriate?:

Images are copyright tagged, and non-free images have fair use rationales:

Images are provided where possible and appropriate, with suitable captions:

Overall:

Pass or Fail:

Good work, I'll place the GA on hold to allow for the changes to be made.--Giants27(Contribs|WP:CFL) 03:30, 8 November 2009 (UTC)

All three prose quality questions have now been addressed. KV5 (Talk • Phils) 12:20, 8 November 2009 (UTC)

Thanks, I'm now passing the article. Very good work on an article about a player, where's sources were limited.--Giants27(Contribs|WP:CFL) 13:34, 8 November 2009 (UTC)