Talk:Panzer Dragoon Mini
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GA Review edit
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Reviewer: NegativeMP1 (talk · contribs) 21:21, 15 November 2023 (UTC)
I'll be reviewing this article. Since it's fairly short, I should have the review done either tonight or tomorrow. NegativeMP1 21:21, 15 November 2023 (UTC)
Aaaand that turned out to be false. Whoops. Anyways, here's the review now. Not doing a checklist because probably not necessary for an article as short as this.
General comments edit
- There are no cleanup banners.
- No signs of copyright violations.
- No edit warring.
- No previous GA reviews to take into account.
Review edit
- For writing, I didn't notice too many issues, but:
- Link "difficulty levels" to Game difficulty.
Done -- Roberth Martinez (talk) 23:28, 18 November 2023 (UTC)
- Change "Its late 1996 release, near the end of the Game Gear's lifespan, makes the game harder to find than earlier releases, a rare collector's item that commands high prices on the secondary collectible market." to something on the lines of "Its late 1996 release, near the end of the Game Gear's lifespan, makes the game harder to find than earlier releases. It is considered a rare collector's item that commands high prices on the secondary collectible market." for better reading.
- Done -- Roberth Martinez (talk) 23:28, 18 November 2023 (UTC)
- The Reception section could be considered repetition of "X said Y", but I think for a subject as obscure as this with the limited sources available, it's written well enough and shouldn't have to be changed.
- For sourcing, I am assuming good faith here since I can't speak Spanish or Japanese.
- Article I believe covers all coverage necessary for a subject such as this. It presents all coverage in an unbiased manner as well.
- Add a caption to the cover art and alternate text to the gameplay screenshot.
Final Comments edit
Yeah, I don't see many problems with this article that should stop it from becoming a GA besides the few minor things I pointed out. I'll put this on hold until the issues I pointed out are addressed, but they're fairly minor. NegativeMP1 23:20, 18 November 2023 (UTC)
- Done -- @NegativeMP1:I did all the changes that you pointed out in your review comments. Is there anything else left? Roberth Martinez (talk) 23:44, 18 November 2023 (UTC)