Talk:Pandemonium effect
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Jargon makes Bad Context edit
There is too much jargon and technical language in the parts of the article that attempt to provide context. The article sounds like a college physics textbook intended for college students that major in physics. That means that, unless you are at least as familiar with physics as a college student that majors in physics, you will have no idea about what this subject even is. In fact, the only way that I know this article is about a Physics concept is because on this WP:TALKPAGE, there is a template declaring that this article is within the umbrella of WP:WikiProject Physics. I shouldn't have to go to a talk page for context. I also shouldn't have to click on a bunch of other links in order to get a basic grasp of a subject. The lead should provide enough context to be a concise overview. This one doesn't, for most readers.
That is my motivation behind adding those cleanup templates.