Talk:Operation Ferdinand

Latest comment: 8 years ago by Zawed in topic GA Review

GA Review edit

This review is transcluded from Talk:Operation Ferdinand/GA1. The edit link for this section can be used to add comments to the review.

Reviewer: Zawed (talk · contribs) 08:39, 2 May 2016 (UTC)Reply

I'll take this one. Comments to follow over the next couple of days. Cheers. Zawed (talk) 08:39, 2 May 2016 (UTC)Reply

This article is looking to be in great shape, I have only noted a few things, most of which should be straightforward to address. I made a few minor ce tweaks as I went through as well. Zawed (talk) 10:45, 9 May 2016 (UTC)Reply

GA review (see here for what the criteria are, and here for what they are not)
  1. It is reasonably well written.
    a (prose):   b (MoS for lead, layout, word choice, fiction, and lists):  
    1) Infobox: the objective field is blank?
    2) Dupe link: Seventh Army
    3) Operation Royal Flush is linked on the second usage, not the first.
  2. It is factually accurate and verifiable.
    a (reference section):   b (citations to reliable sources):   c (OR):  
    1) Holt and Lloyd are missing publisher's location.
    2) Latimer has a double colon in the publisher's location.
  3. It is broad in its coverage.
    a (major aspects):   b (focused):  
    1) "originally threatened by Vendetta" - no context for Vendetta? Presumably another deception plan?
  4. It follows the neutral point of view policy.
    Fair representation without bias:  
  5. It is stable.
    No edit wars, etc.:  
  6. It is illustrated by images and other media, where possible and appropriate.
    a (images are tagged and non-free content have fair use rationales):   b (appropriate use with suitable captions):  
  7. Overall:
    Pass/Fail:  

Thanks! I'll get onto this later! --Errant (chat!) 18:18, 10 May 2016 (UTC) @Zawed: I think I've addressed these issues. Vendetta was a sub-plan of Zeppelin so I called it out when introducting that plan. --Errant (chat!) 13:49, 13 May 2016 (UTC)Reply

OK, looks good so passing as GA. Cheers. Zawed (talk) 21:55, 14 May 2016 (UTC)Reply