Talk:Obsessed (2009 film)/GA2

GA Review

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Reviewer: Rusted AutoParts (talk) 17:47, 31 December 2011 (UTC) I'll give this a lookie-loo.

• It's well written. Rusted AutoParts (talk) 18:05, 31 December 2011 (UTC)
• I think the picture of Beyonce and Ali could work better in Critical reception as it's dealing with the praise the fight scene garnered. Rusted AutoParts (talk) 18:06, 31 December 2011 (UTC)
• First problem is the ending of the film shouldn't be in the WP:LEAD paragraph. The lead could also use a little re-write, decide what belongs in it, other than why the outfits the women wore were chosen. Rusted AutoParts (talk) 17:49, 31 December 2011 (UTC)

Isn't the lead supposed to summarise the whole article? Why shouldn't the ending go in the lead? —Andrew_stalk 18:30, 31 December 2011 (UTC)

I don't think that stretches to film's endings. More like a brief description of the plot for the LEAD. Save the ending for the Plot. Rusted AutoParts (talk) 18:35, 31 December 2011 (UTC)

• "according to Sady Doyle of [[The Guardian]]". Fix the linking to the newspaper. Rusted AutoParts (talk) 17:54, 31 December 2011 (UTC)
• Upon reading the first GA review, it appears that some of the issues brought up there haven't been taken care of. Due to this, i will have to fail this. Please deal with the issues brought up here and the other review before re-nominating. Rusted AutoParts (talk) 18:16, 31 December 2011 (UTC)