Talk:Nowhere girls

Latest comment: 9 years ago by KTo288 in topic Rewrite needed

Rewrite needed edit

I've tried to improve the article but the sections such as causes and effects takes the assertions and suppositions made by the television program zh:沒女大翻身, at face value, and is written as if this programme was an honest documentary of a documented sociological condition. It is not, the programme was dishonest in trying to squeeze entertainment value from seven unhappy women, and dressed it up as a reflection of reality, and apart from TVB's own material, which as a prime source, is not a reliable source, the other references in this article are a commentary of the programme not about the "phenomena" of nowhere girls in society. Unless reliable academic sources can be found, this article will be as dishonest as the TV programme. I suggest that this article be rewritten as an article about the television program.--KTo288 (talk) 07:54, 1 November 2014 (UTC)Reply