Talk:Nia Archives

Latest comment: 3 months ago by AirshipJungleman29 in topic Did you know nomination

Did you know nomination edit

The following is an archived discussion of the DYK nomination of the article below. Please do not modify this page. Subsequent comments should be made on the appropriate discussion page (such as this nomination's talk page, the article's talk page or Wikipedia talk:Did you know), unless there is consensus to re-open the discussion at this page. No further edits should be made to this page.

The result was: promoted by AirshipJungleman29 talk 17:57, 1 February 2024 (UTC)Reply

5x expanded by Launchballer (talk). Self-nominated at 01:54, 6 January 2024 (UTC). Post-promotion hook changes for this nom will be logged at Template talk:Did you know nominations/Nia Archives; consider watching this nomination, if it is successful, until the hook appears on the Main Page.Reply

  • Review pending (as far as I'm aware I don't think it's any harm to review this nom even though I originally created the article?). cybertrip👽 ( 💬📝) 12:33, 7 January 2024 (UTC)Reply
General: Article is new enough and long enough
Policy: Article is sourced, neutral, and free of copyright problems

Hook eligibility:

  • Cited:  
  • Interesting:  
  • Other problems:   - Original hook is by far the most interesting in my opinion, but I'm wondering if the reference to Burial may be a slight case of WP:FANCRUFT and the phrase "got into" may be a tad colloquial/ambiguous? Might I suggest that the hook may be even more interesting if it read "... that before Nia Archives discovered jungle music, she wanted to be an archaeologist?" or something along those lines? Also, please provide at least one source to support the hook (I don't make the rules unfortunately </3).
QPQ: Done.

Overall:   @Launchballer: Hello! Very beautifully written article and incredible sourcing. Did one or two edits of my own simply because I'm a perfectionist. Copyvio detector showed a 61% strike but it should be fine since its connected to one sizable quote under "Artistry". cybertrip👽 ( 💬📝) 18:32, 7 January 2024 (UTC)Reply

Burial was intended as a play on words since archaeology and burial are similar, but perhaps the capital B neuters this somewhat. Archaeology was already sourced in the article, and I've split up the bit about Burial so that it uses a second reference.--Launchballer 22:48, 7 January 2024 (UTC)Reply
ALT3: ... that before becoming a jungle musician, Nia Archives wanted to be an archaeologist? (The word 'jungle' and thus the link can be removed if necessary, I just happen to be a fan of the genre.)--Launchballer 23:04, 7 January 2024 (UTC)Reply
@Launchballer: haha that's a good one! I feel a bit slow for not catching on lol.   Approving ALT3 as it is. cybertrip👽 ( 💬📝) 08:16, 8 January 2024 (UTC)Reply