Talk:New York State Route 31/GA1

Latest comment: 13 years ago by Racepacket in topic GA Review

GA Review edit

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Reviewer: Racepacket (talk) 04:51, 6 December 2010 (UTC)Reply

GA review (see here for criteria)

This is a nice piece of work, congratulations.

  1. It is reasonably well written.
    a (prose):   b (MoS for lead, layout, word choice, fiction, and lists):  
    "to the south as it enters the hamlets of Elmgrove," - one hamlet?
    Oops...the plural form is a remnant from when the section was a bit more cursory than it is now. Fixed.
  2. It is factually accurate and verifiable.
    a (references):   b (citations to reliable sources):   c (OR):  
  3. It is broad in its coverage.
    a (major aspects):   b (focused):  
    Are there any future plans outside Rochester? Rebuilding of bridges, etc.?
    Not that I'm aware of.
    Perhaps mention that College Avenue reflects that the route starts near the campus of Niagara College?
    I think that's too bold of an assumption to make without citing it to a source explicitly stating as such. While the city of Niagara Falls likely named the street for the college's nearby south campus - which has since been transferred to the state and converted into a park - it's a bit OR-ish to claim as much without attributing it to a reliable source.
    Any traffic density data?
    Added the "highlights", if you will.
  4. It follows the neutral point of view policy.
    Fair representation without bias:  
  5. It is stable.
    No edit wars, etc.:  
  6. It is illustrated by images, where possible and appropriate.
    a (images are tagged and non-free images have fair use rationales):   b (appropriate use with suitable captions):  
  7. Overall:
    Pass/Fail:  

I am putting the article on hold. Racepacket (talk) 05:38, 6 December 2010 (UTC)Reply

Made some changes as described above. – TMF 15:34, 6 December 2010 (UTC)Reply
Good work. Congratulations. Racepacket (talk) 02:31, 7 December 2010 (UTC)Reply