Talk:NSB El 18/GA1

Latest comment: 12 years ago by Jezhotwells in topic GA Review

GA Review edit

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Reviewer: Jezhotwells (talk) 20:29, 7 June 2011 (UTC)Reply

I shall be reviewing this article against the Good Article criteria, following its nomination for Good Article status.

Disambiguations: one found and fixed.[1] Jezhotwells (talk) 20:36, 7 June 2011 (UTC)Reply

Linkrot: none found. Jezhotwells (talk) 20:36, 7 June 2011 (UTC)Reply

Checking against GA criteria edit

GA review (see here for what the criteria are, and here for what they are not)
  1. It is reasonably well written.
    a (prose):   b (MoS for lead, layout, word choice, fiction, and lists):  
    ... and the cabs are pressure tight. What does this mean?
    Explained Arsenikk (talk) 21:21, 7 June 2011 (UTC)Reply
    ... and that NSB could expect "a racket" Would "dispute" be a better word than "racket"?
    It is a bit difficult to translate this. The term "skikkelig bråk" could be translated to "dispute", but it implies much more than that; these are rather angry unionists who were a bit pissed off. Dispute seems a bit soft, but then again it may be more accurate than racket. Anyhow, there seems to be no optimal translation here. I'll change it though. Arsenikk (talk) 21:21, 7 June 2011 (UTC)Reply
    Thanks for the fixes. Dispute is a better word in English. Jezhotwells (talk) 22:50, 7 June 2011 (UTC)Reply
  2. It is factually accurate and verifiable.
    a (references):   b (citations to reliable sources):   c (OR):  
    References appear to check out.
  3. It is broad in its coverage.
    a (major aspects):   b (focused):  
    Sufficient detail without trivia.
  4. It follows the neutral point of view policy.
    Fair representation without bias:  
  5. It is stable.
    No edit wars, etc.:  
  6. It is illustrated by images, where possible and appropriate.
    a (images are tagged and non-free images have fair use rationales):   b (appropriate use with suitable captions):  
    Licensed, captioned and tagged.
  7. Overall:
    Pass/Fail:  
    On hold for above issues to be addressed. Jezhotwells (talk) 20:56, 7 June 2011 (UTC)Reply
Thanks for the very fast review. Arsenikk (talk) 21:21, 7 June 2011 (UTC)Reply
It's a pleasure, I am now happy to pass this. Jezhotwells (talk) 22:50, 7 June 2011 (UTC)Reply