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- This review is transcluded from Talk:Music of Ni no Kuni/GA1. The edit link for this section can be used to add comments to the review.
Reviewer: Maplestrip (talk · contribs) 10:54, 21 October 2015 (UTC)
Let's see what we got:
- The first sentence in the lead seems particularly long. It might be an idea to break it up, though I'm not sure how. It is not a big problem and it doesn't stand in the way of GA.
- "The game's music was nominated for numerous awards." – weren't we discussing the music of two games?
- "...of Ni no Kuni, they contacted Joe Hisaishi to work on the game's music." – same issue as above.
- Fair use rationale is in order.
- Article is excellent - I don't have much to critique about it and I Support it becoming a Good Article~
- Is this the place where I'm supposed to advertise my own FL candidate? /not sure how this works. ~Mable (chat) 10:54, 21 October 2015 (UTC)
- Just a kind reminder: You should either pass it or put it on hold instead of supporting it. For details you can see WP:GAI. AdrianGamer (talk) 11:07, 21 October 2015 (UTC)
- (edit conflict) Thanks for the review, Maplestrip! I've gone through and fixed up your concerns. If you feel as though you have no remaining issues, but you don't know how to officially close the review, I recommend reading this. As for advertising your FLC: I definitely think it's okay to share it here, but just be careful that you don't spam it too much. I was planning on leaving some comments over the next few days anyway. Thanks! – Rhain1999 (talk to me) 11:10, 21 October 2015 (UTC)