Talk:Music/Archive 3

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Improvement

I definitely believe this complete article should be improved...I mean, it's the flagship-article of the music project! I'd do something about it myself, but I have no experience at all in matters related to wikipedic editing, perhaps some day i will learn.200.28.211.85 (talk) 13:27, 22 January 2008 (UTC)

Considering the incredibly ambitious scope of the article, I'd like to say it's pretty brilliant, and I think it did a pretty good job of covering the world, too.Jeanhenley (talk) 20:51, 8 June 2008 (UTC)jeanhenley

ABSOLUTLEY NOT —Preceding unsigned comment added by 68.191.34.39 (talk) 17:47, 24 July 2009 (UTC)

There are more than two types of "20th Century Music" (only Jazz and Rock are included)! What about Bluegrass, Country, Old Time, Hip Hop, Rap, New Wave, World, etc? As a Bluegrass Music fan I would have added Bluegrass, but there was no "Edit this page" option. —Preceding unsigned comment added by Mjp179 (talk • contribs) 19:39, 30 October 2009 (UTC)

I agree this entry is not a particularly good or illuminating overview of the subject. For instance any overview of history and all forms of literature will always acknowledge the significance of when people first start writing it down. Only then do we have anything by which we can gain any reliable/first-hand knowledge and experience the subject. The same is surely just the same for music, and would seem to be crucial to this entry.

We know much of what pre-written music was played on and in what contexts, even the range of emotional it stirred. Most importantly, though, we don't know what it actually sounded like - for want of a better expression, its tune. For instance, we believe the Iliad and Odyssey were originally sung - we obviously still know the words, but will surely never know how it sounded, nor be able to to sing it the same way ourselves. The entry needs then to stress the importance of development of a musical language and what that can then tell us of what music sounds like. Obviously a similar leap took place with the arrival of recording technology.JSN2849 (talk) 01:42, 10 November 2009 (UTC)

Composition

A musical composition is a piece of music designed for repeated performance (as opposed to strictly improvisational music, in which each performance is unique). The music may be preserved in memory, or through a written system of notation. Compositions include songs to be performed by human voices, usually including lyrics, as well as pieces written for other musical instruments.

I replaced this entire text, which I realize was cut-and-pasted from the Musical Composition stub. I'm going to go change the stub too. It's much too limited for modern discourse on composition; it essentially describes Western classical music. I attempted to do something about that. Maybe someone else can help? --JEMathews 22:28, 23 Apr 2005 (UTC)

In the musical composition article, at least, you should indicate that the word is used the way you don't like. Hyacinth 02:45, 24 Apr 2005 (UTC)

Changed the article too. Thanks for the welcome. -JEMathews

Music Editing Wiki

Is there a wiki or other site or that allows the contribution and editing of an originial piece of music? Like colaborative writing but for music! Jaberwocky6669 20:28, May 13, 2005 (UTC)

What does it mean?

"In support of the view that music is a label for a totality of different aspects which are culturally constructed". Where is the sentence, the idea?

This article if often edited and frequently vandalized. Even non-vandal edits frequently harm the page and it is extremely difficult to maintain. Surely this information was moved to another paragraph or article, or removed altogether, and that fragment strayed behind. Hyacinth 10:06, 30 March 2006 (UTC)

Music is not to be compared to walking

Music cannot be simply be used in any analogy, walking being a very bad example at that. I can expect the human (body) to be capable of "walking" in any sense, not even as a mere physical capacity or motor function, but in any case as a biped vertebrae actively and voluntarily propelling itself through space. I'm cool with that. But to put music next to walking is to make the assumption that music is the thing every human has conditionally all to readily, or at least to be tempted to do so. Music cannot be defined from a top-down perspective, as it is already a construction in and of itself. To call everything music as you please or see fit is not necessarily wrong, but an active process, ever evolving and in being. It has become virtually impossible to ignore "music". "Music" is slowly conquering the planet as a perspective happily riding the back of - and itself part of - global consequences of everything involving global constructs, like free market economy as a cultural lingua franca. At the same time there is always something already there, ready to be called music. Fine. Cool.

But remember that "music" did not exist in many cultures until introduced as "such", undefinably defined as one "thing", that wasn't even many "things" before, but many "non-things" at most, that did not know each other, because there was no way of comparing. To take an "example" (it is not an "example", but of course only an intangeble, invisible thread to what might have once been): gamelan, as now known on Java and Bali, was never referred to as one "thing", but always as an ensemble - that is the instruments and the "musicians" as a whole. Feel free to compare, or accept that you have no choice. Whatever. Just don't put music next to walking. From my point of view it just seems silly. But hey, nobody's perfect.

To elaborate just a bit more, I could add that activities we call music do not exist in and of itself anyway. Good job of the wiki community to focus mostly on music as a "social construct". Cool, I'm for it. I will not be able to generically define "music", so I won't. But let's take the last church service I visited. "Music" all over the place, but no "music" to be found. Silence, you ask? No. It's just that the "about" was more important than the "music", either structurally, socially and functionally. May I perhaps conclude that there is no reference possible to the "one music", only to the one "service" at that? Perhaps. It does seem like the one unit I can refer to, the case being I just did. Even over the social or the religious "context". There just seemed to be a whole that was not deducible. Perhaps comparable to gamelan. But who wants to know about the generic, really.

There is more text to be added, but perhaps later. First I have to copyright is, because we have created the perfect world wherein writing loads of BS bring in food. And food is good.

The walking comparison appears to have been removed. Hyacinth 08:18, 1 April 2006 (UTC)

I know this is old, but does anybody else thinks this person was really stupid? - anon —The preceding unsigned comment was added by 124.177.237.30 (talk) 12:45, 13 February 2007 (UTC).

Deaf people listening to music is a non sequitur in cognition section

Under 'music cognition' there appears to be piece of information about deaf people listening to music that should be contextualized within the framework of music cognition. The first paragraph is good. —Preceding unsigned comment added by 24.218.18.121 (talk) 10:12, 10 March 2008 (UTC)

Improvement drive

A related topic, Percussion instrument has been nominated to be improved on WP:IDRIVE. Come and support the nomination there or comment on it.--Fenice 06:52, 6 August 2005 (UTC)

Request for input

A new article claims that a young man named Tireh has a world-record-tying vocal range. Another wikipedian requested verification, and the creator provided audio samples. I have no musical expertise to judge them, and in general input to the conversation at Talk:Tireh from more musically knowledgeable Wikipedians than myself would be appreciated. Thank you — Pekinensis 05:44, 10 August 2005 (UTC)

Start of this article too abstract?

Hi, I just wondered by this article and found its opening perhaps a little too abstract for the start of an encyclopaedic entry. Can't it start with something more straightforward, even if not wholly accurate or all-embracing, to be refined further into the article? Cheers, 212.84.98.204 00:49, 6 September 2005 (UTC)

I left the comment above before creating a user profile. Having now wandered about Wikipedia a little more, the music portal's first paragraph strikes me as a more inviting way to start an article about music. David Kernow 17:41, 26 September 2005 (UTC)

I'd say that the opening wasn't too abstract, but tendentious and PoV. --Mel Etitis (Μελ Ετητης) 10:33, 27 September 2005 (UTC)

Regarding: "Those that define music as an external, physical fact, for example "organized sound", or as a specific type of perception" ---- The 'what is music' section is sometimes incorrect, generally incomplete and overall far too inspecific to be usefully included, but this line really makes no sense. Firstly, music can't be a fact. There might be facts about music (if you think musical properties are genuine properties that can be parts/constituents of facts), or facts about the experiences people have when listening to music, but music itself cannot be a fact. So at the very least change the word 'fact' to 'object'. Secondly, the idea that 'music... is a specific type of perception' seems dubious on the same grounds, but should at least not be lumped together with the first claim which is hardly the same thing.

Perhaps, if you want to go into groups of definitions, a better way to split it up is into the important intrinsic definitions (e.g. sound is: 'significant form'; 'a vehicle for emotional expression' (Tolstoy); 'toenend bewegte Formen' (Hanslick), etc. etc.), then functional definitions (e.g. Beardsley's 'sound organised for aesthetic appreciation', also Urmson), procedural definitions (e.g. Danto, Dickie and all the Institutional stuff), historical definitions (e.g. Levinson), definitions emphasising music's social role, and then anything else you want.

I don't know what this transcendental ideal is or how string theory gets involved - to say this stuff is unpopular in the philosophy of music vastly overrates it (and frankly it's a bit of an insult to the whole discipline to include this and not one theory actually written by a philosopher of music!) Words like 'metanarrative' and 'metasubstance' just masquerade as being informative and only serve to obfuscate the real issues, which can and should be laid out in non-technical vocabulary. (If any such issues are to be found in that last paragraph.)

Cage's view would probably be more fairly presented if his addiction to Zen philosophy were noted. But even he doesn't say *anything* can be music - tables and chairs can't, for example. And 'fascistically imposes this definition of everything'? Rather harsh (and a clear misunderstanding). Either a definition proposes normative constraints for the use of a term, or it's a factual enumeration of what things have been called music. Clearly Cage is offering a definition of the former variety, and in that sense it's no worse than someone suggesting that anything that is music has to respect tonality (which 'fascistically' excludes serial music, for example). (In fact, given that Cage's view is far too liberal to make any sense, it's hard to see how it's fascist in the slightest!) Hope this all helps. Zenpea 00:37, 14 January 2006 (UTC)

"Fact" may be a leftover from a definition of music as a total social fact that was moved to Definition of music. Hyacinth 07:16, 1 April 2006 (UTC)

Image?

Wouldn't it be appealing to the eye to include at least one image in this quite central article? Karol 09:12, 22 October 2005 (UTC)

Done. See #Pictures below. Hyacinth 08:05, 1 April 2006 (UTC)

What has 'energy world' to do with music?

Would someone care to explain the reference to the energy world (and 'worlds' in general) quoted in the lead para as part of the definition of music?--Light current 04:37, 2 November 2005 (UTC)

The mention appears to have been removed. Hyacinth 08:06, 1 April 2006 (UTC)

In need of revision...?

Hello again. Further to my post above, I've read this article again after a few weeks and still feel it is a little too abstract, especially the opening few paragraphs. I'm willing to work on trying to make it more straightforward, but am hesitating before "being bold" as I'd prefer no-one who's worked on (and is still watching) the article to feel the need to revert (rather than edit) any contributions I make.

To give you some idea of what I have in mind, I'd first try recasting the opening as an expansion of the Music Portal's introductory paragraph. I agree, for instance, that the walking analogy and phrases such as "energy world" are not particularly useful (see threads above).

Please leave a message here, on my talk page or send me an email, especially if you feel I might be onto a non-starter. Thanks.
David Kernow 15:06, 9 November 2005 (UTC)

What else do you have in mind? Hyacinth 08:08, 1 April 2006 (UTC)

Introduction

I reverted the introduction to an older version written by me (at a time when there was no introduction) that I feel is superior:

• Music is an art, entertainment, or other human activity which involves organized and audible sound, though definitions vary.

I feel this way based on the following priorities I have for the introduction:

1. Brevity. The introduction should be short.
2. Clarity. The introduction should be simple and easily understood.
3. Generality. The introduction should avoid conflicts and discussion. Rather it should provide one definition and indicate that it is not final. (Generally I would say that at most a comparison between three definitions would be acceptable but that in this case the multitude of definitions makes that impossible).

Despite my obvious feelings of ownership for this definition I must also point out that I do not agree with it. However, I feel it is the most common definition (or rather that its components are the most common components of definitions of music) and the one which is the most clear to a reader and most prepares a reader for the further detail later in the article. There is no need to rehash every POV conflict in the main body of the article in its introduction.

As an alternative I would suggest the same introduction but with qualifications, something like:

• Music is an art and entertainment which centers on organized and audible sound, though definitions vary.

Hyacinth 11:51, 4 December 2005 (UTC)

Pictures

I am a musician, but not someone who "studies" the topic. I was reviewing this article for Wikipedia 1.0 and noticed that the intro had been spoilt by a picture inserted by a known vandal. I removed this pic and decided to replace it with 3 more suitable pics from Commons. However those more expert than me may feel my additions are inappropriate or in the wrong place, please feel free to edit these, I simply thought that the article should have some appropriate pictures. Also do you think a short section on musical instruments would be appropriate, with a link to the main article at musical instrument? Cheers, Walkerma 06:08, 29 December 2005 (UTC)

Mention of rhythm in the introduction, perhaps?

I find it hard to swallow that whoever has written this article has managed to 'forget', in the entire six or seven paragraphs of the introduction the importance of time in music. Personally I have only come across ONE type of music without (much) rhythmn - atonal music - and no one likes it much anyway. I have, however, heard plenty without the authors' asserted 'bastions' of music, harmony and melody. Does this need a change, how about something a little less eurocentric guys?

Please Wikipedia:Sign your posts on talk pages. Thanks. Hyacinth 12:44, 23 February 2006 (UTC)

Note that the introduction doesn't currently mention melody or harmony. How about you show a little restraint with your accusations of ethnocentrism? Hyacinth 08:15, 1 April 2006 (UTC)

I agree that this article places much too much emphasis on melody and harmony and pitch and timbre. The article, as its currently written, places those concepts as pillars of the definition of music. However, pitch is rhythm -- (any vibration played with a frequency greater than approximately 40 hertz will be perceived by the human ear as a "pitched" sound -- or play a snare drum 440 times per second and you'll have a noisy 'A' above middle 'C'). Once a person accepts that pitch is just vibration (i.e. rhythm) then melody and harmony must be accepted as mere byproducts. These are not fundamental elements of music and could be discarded from the lead of this article. Regards. 02:46, 2 March 2007 (UTC)

John Cage

I removed the word "fascistically" and replaced with "arbitrarily" (encyclopaedic tone); that sentence still seems a bit unclear to me as to what Cage's critics were actually saying (and its relation to the following musicologist's statement) Leon... 01:03, 9 March 2006 (UTC)

To summarize: Cage's definition imposes itself on the nonmusical. It relates to the following in that they are both about sound/noise. Hyacinth 08:17, 1 April 2006 (UTC)

String Theory?

Can someone please explain to me how string theory is an analogy between music and physics?

I removed the mention. Hyacinth 08:17, 1 April 2006 (UTC)

I wouldn't call it quite an analogy. But a vibrating string (as on a guitar or piano) is the metaphor physicists chose to represent the subatomic process theorized by "string theory," in order to make it more comprehensible. The ease and simplicity of this metaphor is probably part of the reason this theory is so popular (in the name-dropping sense).

Lack of Humanistic Perspective

I find this article's explanation of music extremely dissatisfactory. It treats music purely from a scientific perspective in descriptive and unfeeling terms. For instance, it gives three definitions of music, one asserting that all sound is music, one that music is a cultural construct, and one that it is some platonic ideal, without any further explanation. These definitions fail to take advantage of the fact that humans will be reading the article, not some robot who will never feel music. I am no scholar in music, but I know that hundreds of important figures in history have described how music affected them, poetically, metaphorically, or otherwise. These quotations describe how music affects the interior. What good is a definition of music if it only treats externalities? The externalities are important, yes, but far more people care about how music makes them feel. I suggest that a list of prominent ideas about music as it affects the interior be provided.

The rest of the article is similarly biased toward the externalities of music. It describes how different cultures organize sounds in different ways, and the contexts in which music is encountered, written and studied, but has only a single, paltry sentence to explain what music does that impels people to listen: "Music theory, within this realm, is studied with the presupposition that music is orderly and often pleasant to hear." Is this the best that music scholarship has to offer? That music is "orderly and pleasant to hear"? I would like to hear more about this.

Finally, I find it extremely odd that the five references for this article include one by a psychologist, one by a sociologist, two apparently by a linguist, and just one that is actually on music theory, which appears to make very little appearance in the article. I suggest that this article on music be primarily written from the perspective of the musician and the listener, with scientific discourse being provided where appropriate.

Volucre 22:43, 26 March 2006 (UTC)

First, I welcome your contributions to this and other music related articles. I encourage you to Wikipedia:Cite sources and add information and POVs and Neutrality to the article.

I think you raise a valid point: this article, like most writings on music, neglects the lived experience of music. However, I am unclear as to what you suggest. For example, the article should be written in a neutral manner, not a highly emotional one, even if writing about emotions. Am I correct in assuming that you are talking about reception?

Have you found a definition of music which is based upon how it makes people feel or that it does? I'm not sure what a definition like that would look like.

You seem to want the "internalities" of music to both unify all music under one definition and distinguish between various types of music. I'm not sure how that would work either.

You may also be interested in Definition of music and specifically Definition of music#Music as subjective experience.

The sentence: "Music theory, within this realm, is studied with the presupposition that music is orderly and often pleasant to hear", doesn't explain anything about what music does or what compels them to listen. Also, I think most music theory is either neutral and doesn't presuppose or ever consider the quality or pleasantness of the music it considers, or presupposes the opposite, that most music is crap. Back to the point, the sentence asserts that music is orderly and pleasant, but does not explain why that would compel someone to listen.

For more theory see music theory. I warn you though, most music theory is exclusively about the externals.

What's wrong with referencing a sociologist and/or linguist in an article on music? However, please note that Dane Harwood is a cognitive psychologist but appears to work exclusively in the psychology of music, Julian Johnson is "Reader in the Faculty of Music, Tutorial Fellow in Music, St Anne’s College, Lecturer in Music, St Hilda’s College", Harold Owen "is professor emeritus of composition, musicianship, and music history and former chair of the department of composition at the University of Oregon School of Music", Jean Molino is a semologist and "anthropologist of the music", and Jean-Jacques Nattiez is a "musical semiologist or semiotician and professor of Musicology at the Université de Montréal".

Incidentally, the citations have almost all been lost.

Hyacinth 08:43, 30 March 2006 (UTC)

Poor First Paragraphs

"The definition of music as sound with particular characteristics is taken as a given by psychoacoustics, and is a common one in musicology and performance. In this view, there are observable patterns to what is broadly labeled music, and while there are understandable cultural variations, the properties of music are the properties of sound as perceived and processed by people."

This does not distinguish music from language, without spelling out what characteristics are in mind. Language is sound with particular characteristics, admitting of cultural variations and being perceived and processed by people. Actually, a better attempt is made in the paragraph below the one above, employing harmony and melody, but neither is necessary nor sufficient. (Just think about samba bands or something.) So you might add rhythm to harmony and melody. But then think about serial music, which seems to embody none of the three, since you're supposed not to be hearing a chaotic melody but inversions and retrogrades of hexachords. Or any other more obscure example.

If you want to structure an introduction like this, ditch all the idle theory (of which the existing references are just a handful of arbitrarily picked examples) and start from the beginning. (Especially ditch the stuff about the platonic ideal and so on - for one, it's to do with the ontology of music and not the concept of it. And two, it just makes the article sound like the worst kind of student essay. No-one needs words like meta-narrative and meta-substance.)

So how about the introduction mention some of the less typical examples of what has been considered music (Schoenberg and the serial school, aleatory music, Cage's 4'33, computer music, Japanese gagaku etc. etc.), and show that there's little more in common between them all than that music is always sound and that it always temporally extended (for even a momentary chord requires the notes to be heard simultaneously - i.e. situated in time). As this doesn't capture music any more than it captures performance poetry or conversation, the introduction could then run through a couple of accounts of possible extrinsic criteria to build on the intrinsic: perhaps music is sound that is meant to elicit an emotional response? or music is sound ordered for aesthetic appreciation? etc. and show the reader some of the plausible options. At least this way it would introduce the issue (the project of defining music), show why it's an issue (things the definition should capture are highly heterogenous), and show some possible solutions. At least that would give this bit some structure and purpose.

zenpea 17:30, 29 March 2006 (UTC)

Actually, it would give a list of examples which do little to explain your definition of music. Hyacinth 09:55, 30 March 2006 (UTC)

I never suggested a definition of music. I suggested that this section include plausible accounts of the definition of music, rather than a few arbitrary selections, which are introduced by way of heterogenous examples to show why the job's difficult. zenpea 09:52, 31 March 2006 (UTC)

What would be the process or criteria by which these heterogenous examples are chosen? Hyacinth 11:47, 31 March 2006 (UTC)

Firstly, the examples are counter-examples, so nothing much hangs on the specifics of which ones are used. Anything that someone could say is music that doesn't fit with an putative account will do, as all you're trying to show are the pros and cons of various accounts. e.g. if someone says the essential thing about music is melody, you give a concrete example wholly dependent upon rhythm (e.g. something based on drumming) and ask: is it music? The person suggesting that melody is essential will have to say it isn't. So that may be a downside to their account - it excludes this particular piece of drumming, which may seem ad hoc. Similarly, if someone says determinate form is essential, then you take a piece that contains a selection of elements to be combined freely as the conductor wishes (these were quite common in the mid/late 20th century). Again, it may be a downside that these works are excluded. And so on and so forth. So you just go through the various accounts and bring out borderline examples each time to show why many accounts (particularly accounts based on entirely intrinsic properties of music) are not clearly satisfactory for capturing what we consider to be music. Then the extrinsic accounts, ones which hang the definition of the concept of music not on the particular structure of pieces of music but rather on the relation all works stand in to composer and audience, or to previous works, or to something else, bring up equally interesting counter-examples. The approach will end as an open question (given that there's no final consensus), but at least you've shown why the problem is an issue, how people have disagreed, and the debate has been illuminated with examples of putative music that many people might not be familiar with. Zenpea 23:29, 1 April 2006 (UTC)

That sounds lengthy. Hyacinth 10:15, 2 April 2006 (UTC)

Aspects

I readded the lost Aspects of music section removed [1] for no reason. This readds reference notes 4-6. Notes 1-3 where removed when content was moved to Definition of music. This article is difficult to maintain. Hyacinth 09:45, 30 March 2006 (UTC)

Image

Image:Gerrit van Honthorst - Het Concert.jpg

I removed the above image, The Concert by Gerrit van Honthorst, since its not a real concert and doesn't seem informative. Hyacinth 10:35, 1 April 2006 (UTC)

Platonic ideal

• "The platonic ideal of music is currently the least fashionable in the philosophy of criticism and music, because it is crowded on one side by the physical view - what is the metasubstance of music made of, if not sound? - and on the other hand by the constructed view of music - how can one tell the difference between any metanarrative of music and one which is merely intersubjective? However, its appeal, finding unexpected mathematical relationships in music, and finding analogies between music and physics, means that this view continues to find adherents, including such critics and performers as Charles Rosen and Edward Rothstein."

I removed the above. What is the platonic ideal of music? Hyacinth 10:51, 1 April 2006 (UTC)

Non-commercial professional

• "Finally, there are composers and musicians who are professional without being a direct part of the commercial music industry."

Such as? Hyacinth

Such as composers living mainly from state funds and the like (a very normal arrangement in Europe); or people making a living by playing at a local bar or in the street; or people distributing their music over the internet. Not to mention that the music industry is little more than 100 years old so everything before that! And many others. Why this idea that the music industry is ubiquitous? And why delete that sentence before seeing the answer? --Sangild 12:58, 10 April 2006 (UTC)

Too Staunchy?

The article should contain more about the diversity of music in the world and more than just a few short references to modern music. It largely discusses the professional and classical aspects of music and not much else. Perhaps a section on the diverse styles of music would be helpful. Some pictures of performances of modern music wouldn't hurt either.PierceG 03:20, 5 June 2006 (UTC)

Apparently, death metal and grindcore aren't acceptable forms of music to normal people, and, at most, are harsh forms of music with, at most, underground followings. Yeah, a little bit about the diversity of music would be nice.backstabb 21:07, 2 August 2006 (UTC)

This article's purpose is to define the concept of music and, perhaps, how music effects our human experience. It's not intended to be a list of everybody's favourite style with link to their favourite band. Discussing Grindcore here would be like discussing fast food in an article about economics. If content related to the musical styles, (diversity), is desired, then simply linking to the Music genre page would be sufficient. Regards. 02:15, 2 March 2007 (UTC)

Understood, but the sentence I'm referring to is "The existence of some modern-day genres such as grindcore and noise music, which enjoy an extensive underground following, indicate that even the crudest noises can be considered music if the listener is so inclined." Perhaps implying that such genres are "crude noises". Debatable, but not the point. Modern music styles which have had a major influence on history are barely mentioned in the article. I'm not saying the article should be about Progressive Trance, but discussing the influence of contemporary music does have a place here. backstabb 00:12, 10 March 2007 (UTC)

This article mainly talks about the western tradition of music. (except the one line mention of samaveda being one of the earliest mentions of music.). You should rename it as Music: western tradition or something to that effect. India has rich classical, semiclassical, and folk music traditions, there is the distinct music of central Asia, the Maquam that developed in the area of Afganistan, Iran. This article makes you feel as if the western world was the only one that developed and thought of effects of music. --Kaveri 19:37, 10 July 2007 (UTC)

I totally agree with Kaveri.Leafever 05:09, 3 December 2007 (UTC)

I happen to enjoy Death metal music. most dont accept it because they think its too loud and they cant understand the words. I like the flow ot the music and the technicallity of the music. I say give it a chance. music is music and i think if you love music it isnt fair to discriminate. Enjoy it for what it is.--Lewkis (talk) 14:29, 12 May 2009 (UTC)

I'm wondering where these two articles are?

1. Bass thump -- a type of music that is purely synthetised bass thumps, typically played loudly
2. Boom car -- a type of car with an extremely loud car stereo that produces bass thumps that can be heard a quarter mile away

I searched and could not find them. Does wikipedia have them? DyslexicEditor 10:49, 27 June 2006 (UTC)

I think the bass thump you're referring to might be the four to the floor. I've no idea about the boom car though, sorry. Wintran 02:01, 3 July 2006 (UTC)

Possibly Car audio or DB drag racing, but that's as much as I could find. backstabb 00:17, 10 March 2007 (UTC)

Observations of External Links section

The music article is important and general. Some of the links in this section don't sem to qualify. The Cool Music site link and the Guipoo Music link both seem like spam to me. The first one also breaks NPOV, I think. So, I am going to try to be bold and remove them. Does anyone else disagree with my doing that? I also question whether some of the other links might not really qualify either. Does anyone have any ideas about this? Mildy Amused 19:49, 28 July 2006 (UTC)

Also, I just realized something. The two links I will now be deleting were made by anonymous editors. Their IP addresses show them only making one post. It seems to confirm my thoughts about about them being spam. Mildy Amused 19:52, 28 July 2006 (UTC)

Fine with me. I've noticed a couple questionable links get added but didn't remove them because I couldn't be positive they were spam - ie, there could be an argument that they add some value. Now that someone else is agreeing, I say go for it. -- Laura S | talk to me 20:17, 28 July 2006 (UTC)

Thank you. I looked at each of the links. Most look like spam or they are too specific for the general word music. The website Music Web is a tiny "community" with very few posts and requires a log in. Its description sounds more like a television commercial and not NPOV.South Indian Music is not spam, but it seems too narrow to be on a general page like music. The Virginia Tech Multimedia Music Dictionary and probably Wikia's Music are the only ones that seem to apply. I looked at the very first time the Wikia Music site was created a year ago. Now I am not sure about that one either. So, is it really a good idea for us to really wipe out the links section and only keep two links?

Mildy Amused 19:41, 2 August 2006 (UTC)

I took a while to respond to this because I'm not sure what to do here. I agree that the spam links should go. Some of them weren't so obviously spammy but still set off small alarms with me, so I have absolutely no objections if you want to get rid of them. Music Web would be an example. The narrow links such as South Indian Music are what troubles me. I want to say that they are too narrow and shouldn't be there - if they're worthwhile links they should be linked from their specifically related articles (if they exist). On the other hand, music links are music links. But in the end, I think since we can't possibly have external links to all music-related subjects, it might be best to get rid of the narrow ones. You could even make a POV argument that only some types of music are represented in the links.

The number of links doesn't bother me; if only two are appropriate, then we should only have two. I'm guessing there are more sites out there that would be good to link to; maybe a Google search would yield some good links. Maybe I will look tomorrow; it's 2:30am here and time for me to sleep. :) -- Laura S | talk to me 06:40, 6 August 2006 (UTC)

The "South Indian Music" link is indeed spam; users like 202.83.52.9 (t c), 202.83.52.31 (t c), and 202.83.52.19 (t c) have been adding it to many articles. And even if it weren't spam, I think it would belong at Music of India or a similar article. Wmahan . 00:39, 9 August 2006 (UTC)

Laura S and Wmahan, I totally agree with every point you both made made. If we're all in agreement, then we could delete them all except the two more appropriate links, The Virginia Tech Multimedia Music Dictionary and Wikia's Music. Do we all agree?

Mildy Amused 15:03, 9 August 2006 (UTC)

I agree, and I went ahead and removed the other links. Wmahan. 09:14, 10 August 2006 (UTC)

Hip Hop

A recent edit brought this paragraph to my attention:

In one opinion, Hip-Hop is said to be a popular style of music, but this is merely a cultural phrase used by fans of such a style. Hip-hop is not music, because, according to the most recent of dictionaries and resources, music "is the art of combining instrumental sounds that create beauty of form, pleasant sounds, and harmony." Hip-hop does not do any of these to any acceptable extent, and therefore is not technically music.

This sounds awfully POV, especially the part implying that hip-hop doesn't create "pleasant sounds", etc. It's also not sourced and is stuck in the "Education" section where it's totally out of place. Lastly, it was added by a user with no other edits at all. Would anyone object if I removed this paragraph? -- Laura S | talk to me 14:07, 3 August 2006 (UTC)

Please do. It's nonsense. MarkBuckles (talk) 14:20, 3 August 2006 (UTC)

Done. The more I looked at it, the more it grated on me. -- Laura S | talk to me 14:45, 3 August 2006 (UTC)

Yeah, that's trash.--HisSpaceResearch 21:41, 13 February 2007 (UTC)

Yes, I think hiphop rules (you can POV in the talk page), and even though some don't it's still a genre of music which some people lile —Preceding unsigned comment added by The drunken guy (talk • contribs) 15:28, 9 July 2009 (UTC)

Lead

Here are some of the issues I'd like to resolve: I'm uncomfortable with silence being mentioned as one of the primary elements of music in the first line. Clearly, there is silence in music, and 4'33" is an important piece, philosophically and artistically. However, this is a survey article of an incredibly broad topic. Fundamentally, music is sound.

Furthermore, tones are sound. Need the sentence say "sounds or tones"?

I'm also uncomfortable with the adjective "human" as a defining characteristic of music. Most animals make music, birdsong being one of most clear examples. "Human" is also mentioned twice in the lead which seems unnecessary.

I find the writing unnecessarily difficult to understand: "Music involves complex generative forms in time through the construction of patterns and combinations of natural stimuli, principally sound."

Besides being difficult to parse, not all music is complex, and not all of it involves generative forms. Plus, what stimuli are we talking about besides sound? I think the entire sentence is unnecessary, at least for the lead.

I had a try at revising some of this but my edits were reverted without comment. Can we please work together to improve this? Best wishes, MarkBuckles (talk) 14:50, 5 August 2006 (UTC)

Sound and silence, silence is confusing. I agree. --phocks (talk) 02:35, 5 February 2008 (UTC)

Music as Time

Hi MarkBuckles,

I had earlier attempted to explain this, I would repeat it.

You asked me whether anything was meant by the term "like sound" in music defn. Well, In music theory, music is the generative process of structures of time. It could be represented in different forms that could express structures and form of time and interval. Hence the German philosopher Goethe said "Architecture is frozen music".

Literature uses alphabets to express ideas however literature is not the study of alphabets rather it is the expression and analysis of cultural ideas through writing. Alphabets are just the tools of literature. Hence in todays world, cinema is considered as a form of literature because a lot of modern expression of ideas is done through film. So it is not a hard and fast rule that expression of cultural ideas should only be through words, grammar or alphabets.

In like manner musical expression (expression of structures of time) has traditionally been represented through sound. Meaning using sound as a tool for musical expression, just as literature uses alphabets as a tool for cultural communication. However there is no hard and fast rule that it should only be sound or that only sound could be used as a representation of structures of time. In fact most music scholars consider some of the greatest works of European classical music to be best understood only through the notational representation of music to be read and interpreted by each individual. This is particularly the case with the masterpiece composition Die Kunst der Fuge by Johann Sebastian Bach.

This was further expressed in the dadaist music of 1912 by Viking Eggeling called as visual symphony or more popularly known as "diagonal symphony", which represented music in diagonal patterns of lines and intersections on film and the revolutionary concept of serialism by Schoenberg, Alban berg and Anton webern which is further expressed in minimalist music. Some of these ideas are also expressed in the classical rock masterpiece compositions like echoes by Pink Floyd (1971).

P.S. It is important to use the expression "generative process" in the defn because that is the most defining characteristic process of music, of how few elementary notes interact to generate infinite forms, styles and compositions of music. May be we could remove the word complex. thanks for your collaboration. Robin klein 18:46, 5 August 2006 (UTC)

Response

Hi Robin! Thanks for your response. :) I still have many concerns! Most of my points remain unaddressed: (use of the "silence" in the lead, use of "human", apparent redudant phrase "sounds or tones", and ease of comprehension.

Regarding your explanation of time, firstly let me say that I'm sorry I'm unaware of your previous explanations and thank you for sharing with me. I remain really unconvinced however! I feel that the compositional devices you are mentioning (Art of the Fugue, Serialism, Minimalism) are all devices aimed at creating sound! Composers and scholars I've worked with have always made the point that "the music is not the score." The score is merely a prescription for sound, even in theoretical works - because without sound, there would be no basis for the theory. Am I misunderstanding your point?

Regarding time, of course music exists in time, and this is one of the fundamental points of its definition which should be mentioned probably in the first sentence. However, I believe its medium is sound. Per your analogies to literature - I'm confused. I know there's a clear comparison with, for example, visual arts, which exist perpetually. Isn't there many things that exist in time though and not just music? Movies are not perpetual, at least no more than recordings or notated scores, and many non-artistic events occur in time as well. Do you see why I'm confused?

Works like the dadaist symphony, Cage's piece, or thousands of other pieces of art that are associated with music are the exception to the rule, not part of the rule.

Dictionary.com yields this definition: "The art of arranging sounds in time so as to produce a continuous, unified, and evocative composition, as through melody, harmony, rhythm, and timbre."

Well, I find all three adjectives subjective, but I find the first phrase spot on. Music is artistic, it arranges sound, and it exists in time. Can we make our lead as clear? MarkBuckles (talk) 05:24, 6 August 2006 (UTC)

Hi MarkBuckles, I am not convinced by your arguements either. Cage's music though a novelty piece for concert performance, is actually a representation of the underlying temporal basis of music. Selling a recording of cage's 4'33" is like selling hot air in room temperature. :))

My point is this: The element of music as "time" and as a "generative process" (simple or complex) is most essential and any definition of music should state this in its main statement. (refer to Ray Jackendoff and Fred Lerdahl, Music psychology, Pitch class space, Cognitive Constraints on Compositional Systems and Generative grammar of music). Robin klein 18:34, 6 August 2006 (UTC)

I think that "The art of arranging sounds in time so as to produce a continuous, unified, and evocative composition, as through melody, harmony, rhythm, and timbre." best describes music. Music is organised sound in its basis. I think reference to early music such as baroque, classical and romantic would be better rather than experimental composers such as John Cage. Just my opinion if it helps. :-)

The existence of some modern-day genres such as death metal and grindcore, which enjoy an extensive underground following, indicate that even the harshest sounds can be considered music if the listener is so inclined.

Is it just me or is that a really subjective line right there, for all we know the Beach Boys might be considered harsh in twenty years and grindcore reclassified as light pop.

Also, all this jive about music is made to make you feel good is whack, I think just calling music the 'art of sound' or 'sounds arranged together' is about as neutral as you could get.

Delete this sentence?

"Music may also involve generative forms in time through the construction of patterns and combinations of natural stimuli, principally sound."

Anybody who once thought they new what music is certainly won't have clue after reading that sentence.

• Music 'IS' a form generated by sounds in time -- the word "may" is not necessary.
• Patterns have nothing to do with anything. (Unless we're all still stuck in the Classical period.)
• "'Principally' sound" ? That phrase suggests that there may be an alternative stimuli which can be constructed in time to produce music? The word "principally" can be discarded.
• "Natural stimuli" ? Is there any other kind? (I'm suggesting that the adjective can be dropped.)
• Sound 'IS' natural. And sound stimulates. I don't think there's any need to be wordy and obfuscate the logic by saying "natural stimuli, principally sound".

I'll suggest the entire sentence could be discarded and the sentence "Music is sound in time" could be moved into its place(which, in fewer words, achieves everything the original author intended). Any objections? Regards. 02:32, 2 March 2007 (UTC)

Music History section

I've just done a little revamping of the music history section. However, the full length article about music history contradicts this section (about the samaveda, I think), and its introduction is both clearer and more concise (and more to the point) than this section. What if I just cut the whole music history section and paste the intro from the history of music article? J Lorraine 08:18, 11 October 2006 (UTC)

Definition of Music

Right now this article states "The broadest definition of music is organized sound that is pleasing to the average ear." However, as someone who has studied music education, I still don't think this is broad enough. I don't think the "average ear" part is the best term to use because there are many forms of music that are enjoyed by very few people. And besides that, the average ear enjoys top 40 and county music. An example of the non-average ear is Alvin Curran, whose "music" is a bit too far out there for me, but there are probably some people who enjoy it and consider it music. Other forms of atonal and non-tonal music are just as questionable to many people, but there are those that consider it music.

I think a better broad definition is to say "The broadest definition of music is organized sound that is pleasing to a group of people." So I'm going to change the wording. —The preceding unsigned comment was added by Suso (talk • contribs) 15:21, 3 December 2006 (UTC).

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I've been thinking about it a lot and I have come up with the following defintion of music:

'Linear arrangement of sound-concepts for entertainment rather than utility.'

I phone ringing is not music, it is purely functional, but those downloadable ringtones are, because they're embellishing to add entertainment value to the utility. I say 'sound-concepts' rather than just 'sound' because music written down is still music, is commonly referred to as such, and can even be 'heard' in the minds of trained music readers; and furthermore silence is part of music too. I say 'linear' because they must be linked, not just a big list of sounds. I think this definition successfully distinguishes the sounds which we call music and the sounds which we create but do not call music, and does so without making any assumptions about the audience or the reception.

so are footsteps music? how about tapdancing? what about tapdancers rehearsing?

Please sign your posts! Now, there are a few problems with this working definition. (1) "Linear"? In what way do the sounds have to be linked? Not all music demonstrates unity of any kind. (2) Referring to "sound-concepts" begs the question of who does the conceptualizing with regards to a given music. Not all music exists fundamentally in someone's mind, even a composer's. (3) This will probably be easiest for you to agree to: only some music is used for entertainment. Medieval plainchant, for example, was not for entertainment. Dunkelweizen (talk) 18:40, 5 December 2007 (UTC)

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My music teacher always said 'Keep It Simple Stupid' so he tells us the definition of music is 'A combination of sound and silence'. I belive music is a opinon of the lisener. The phrase 'Music to my ears' may mean good news, still the news may not be good to someone else. Rock-Style music may sound good to me, but someone else may say its just noise, not music. —Preceding unsigned comment added by 125.254.66.213 (talk) 01:15, 6 July 2008 (UTC)

The Cultural Similarities and Differences Between Music of Different Nations and People.

I am writing a news article on The Cultural Similarities and Differences Between Music of Different Nations and People, and I was wondering what everyone's opinion on this is. It would be of great help and perhaps it may contribute to this Wikipedia article in some way, please get back to me if you wish to share your opinions. Psychron 15:25, 24 January 2007 (UTC)

questionable paragraph (who can call themselves a musician)

I don't think the following paragraph belongs in this article:

"In professional music, a distinction must be drawn between musicians that perform and performers who make music. All musicians must perform, but not all musical performers can call themselves musicians. In order to be considered a musician, one must play a musical instrument reasonably well. Vocalists run into trouble in some instances, depending on whether critics happen to believe that a voice is an instrument; for example, Isaac Stern may be considered a musician, whereas Jessica Simpson may not."

It strikes me as belonging in the realm of personal judgement (opinion) instead of encylclopedic information. I'll remove it if there's no objection. J Lorraine 09:44, 20 February 2007 (UTC)

Music psychology

i found information in that site www.2knowmyself.com saying that music reduces the breathing rate and so reduces stress, the site is not refrenced, could i include this information in the music main page? —Preceding unsigned comment added by User talk:196.205.239.30 (talk • contribs)

It's possible that might be a valid reference, but you didn't link to the page with the information, you just linked to the website's main page - so there's no way to confirm it would be relevant.

But more importantly, if you include the link, where would you put it? There is a section of this article about therapeutic uses of music, and that section needs improvement, so you could be bold and add information there; if it applies, you could refer to the website link as a reference for the edits you add. If you do though, make sure to link to the correct page on the website. For information of what links are good to include, please refer to this article: Wikipedia:External links.

I suggest that you first learn a bit more about how Wikipedia works. There is more information about how to proceed on your personal user talk page at this link: User talk:196.205.239.30 [re-editing to add my signature omitted from original edit dated 17:02, 9 April 2007] --Parzival418 23:40, 15 April 2007 (UTC)

Where?

Is there, and if so, where is ther topic for music affecting on learning? ..awesomisticisms 06:01, 8 May 2007 (UTC)

major revisions to the article

Cosprings, I reverted the major reorganization of the article you did today. I can see you did a lot of work on it and I did not revert your changes casually. Your changes may even have improved the article, but there was so much changed all at once that couldn't tell if anything important was lost or modified.

At least one thing was lost - there was an semi-protection template on the page that was there due to recent vandalism and your edits unintentionally removed that tempalte.

Your help with the article is very welcome, it can certainly use improvement. But before doing something so major, it's important to discuss it with the other editors working on the article. Also, because your changes involved a reorganization of so many headings and "see also" or "main article" templates, we should go step by step, attaining consensus along the way.

Or, if you want to do it all at once, we can create a new sub-page with your new version so we can look at it in full and decide if there is consensus for replacing the main page with the new version.

If you don't know how to do that, let me know and I'll help you set it up with your edited version. Then you can ask the other editors here if they agree with your new organization, and if there is consensus, we can make the big change. You can contact me here or on my talk page.

Thank you for your work on the article, I look forward to seeing the improvements once you engage in the process with the other editors here. --Parzival418 _Hello 03:45, 20 June 2007 (UTC)

Are you kidding me? Why would I bother engaging in a discussion with editors about music? I don't know who you editors are, why would I with reason respect your opinion on a subject on which I am an academic? Apparantly, you agree that with the current page, that ornamentation is a notation, which is part of performance?!!? NO! This website died when it decided it could be the distributor of expertise. Wiki is supposed to be democratic, open to all, you wont let some obviously good changes through because they didn't go throguh the beauracracy! The page looks terrible now! This is one of the pages which everyone in the world knows something about, and you want to lock it? Wiki is great, but its people like you, who make everyone engage in red tape, which make it annoyingly American. This system of editors was supposed to defend from vandalism, not progress. If you believe in democracy, please leave the page the way I had it and let ALL others edit it.Cosprings 16:20, 20 June 2007 (UTC)

Please calm down a bit. This is not about red tape, it's just about respecting each other while we work on the articles. I did not say I don't think your edits were not improvements, maybe they are and we should include them. What I said was there were so many changes at once that it was hard to see what you did and that we should discuss it first. By the way, I also saw the many edits you did on other articles, for example History of music, and Music market and I did not revert them because they seemed to improve the articles.

Also, the page is not locked. The semi-protection template does not apply to you. It does not stop you from editing the article. It applies only to new editors or anonymous IP editors - the reason it is there is that this article was vandalized several times a day for a long time by people who were just causing trouble for fun.

You are welcome to edit Wikipedia and your are invited to improve the articles. But to do that, you need to recognize that Wikipedia is a community and there is a wide variety of people here working on articles. The community is based on mutual respect, civility, collaboration and consensus. In your first response to my comment, your first communication with me, you insulted me several times and you insulted other editors who have worked on this and other articles. That's not an acceptable way of communicating here.

You seem to have a lot of knowledge about music and I'm sure you can make valuable improvements to the articles. To do that, you need to learn how Wikipedia works. It's not a democracy, it's run by consensus and based on core principles. At the end of this comment, I'll include links to a few articles you can read to get familiar with how things are done in this community. If you are willing to review those articles, I think you'll find the system is pretty good and you will be able to join in and make valuable contributions.

I also noticed that whenever someone has posted a comment on your user talk page, you have immediately blanked the page. You have the right to do that, but over time, you'll find that is not an effective way of making progress. Sometimes blanking parts of your talk page is useful. But in general because this is a community, especially within the subject areas of various articles, after a while people get to know each other and part of that involves communications on the article and user talkpages. You've already received some warnings on your talk page that you have blanked. The reason that happened is that you were making changes so fast and not discussing them. Especially major changes, like you did on this article, or as you did at Portal:Music/Featured article. The articles featured there are a result of a nomination and consensus process by people working on the project of improving the music portal. As an academic with knowledge in this area, you might want to join that project and make a difference. But again, to do what you want, you need to respect the other people here and the Wikipedia policies and guidelines. If you think the polices or guidelines are wrong - you can also go to those pages and improve them as well, if you can get consensus from the editors working on those pages.

Here are the articles I mentioned that can help you learn about how the system works - there are additional articles linked within these. It's a an interesting and resiliant system once you start to appreciate how deep it is and how it allows so many thousands of people to work together productively:

• Wikipedia:Five pillars
• Wikipedia:Civility
• Wikipedia:Assume good faith
• Wikipedia:Consensus
• Wikipedia:No personal attacks
• Wikipedia:Talk page guidelines
• Wikipedia:BOLD, revert, discuss cycle

If you are willing to communicate with me without insults or demands, I would be happy to help you improve this article. --Parzival418 _Hello 18:42, 20 June 2007 (UTC)

needs correction-

Would someone fix this article so it's about something other than India??

Somebody really seems to have fixed it. Now it is all about Western music. --Kaveri 02:56, 13 August 2007 (UTC)

Muslims and Music

I think the statement that 'Listening to music is considered a sin by Muslims' is quite inflammatory and strikes me as being a personal judgement, especially considering the Wiki article on Islamic Music. I think that it stinks of paradox because the reading of the Qu'ran itself, by the definitions made in this article, would cause it to be a an act of music and if listening to music is a sin, then listening to the a professional recitation of the Qu'ran would also be a sin. This is ridiculous, the statement should be removed. --preceding comment by User:LafcadioRobot

At least members of the Wahhabi school of jurisprudence I personally adhere to believe that music is sinful. It was considered evil by first generations of Muslims. Note also that most musicians are very corrupted people who engage in activities like adultery and narcotics and some of them consider themselves prophets of Allah which is evident from inserting (by themselves or their followers) of the p.b.u.h. honorific after their names (see in my edit history; I recently removed 2 such instances). See also this fatwa to remove all doubts that music is haram: [2] Aminullah 14:24, 13 August 2007 (UTC)

Please sign your posts on talk pages per Wikipedia:Sign your posts on talk pages. Thanks! Hyacinth 23:47, 19 August 2007 (UTC)

Popular music section

This article focuses exclusively on “art music.” It should have a section added on popular music (jazz, rock, rap, whatever), and at least one picture on the subject. --S.dedalus 22:12, 15 October 2007 (UTC)

See #Bias, below. Hyacinth (talk) 08:40, 23 March 2008 (UTC)

Concerns on stance with Amatuers.

I noticed the phrase "in some rare cases amatuer musicians attain professional status" and do not think it entirely fair to amatuers. While it may or may not be the case that this is rare - I do not claim this is an area of special study for me - the point is implied that amatuers are a 'lesser breed' of musisians. I disagree. In many cases amatuers may simply choose not to 'go professional'. This point needs to be underlined in red ink, metaphorily speaking, lest a significant force in the musical world take offence.

Targ Collective 194.81.176.254 15:06, 5 November 2007 (UTC)

it's amateur

Surely all proffesionals were amateurs once so in fact its not rare at all (91.107.80.33 (talk) 22:00, 4 May 2009 (UTC))

1750 was not the date when Handel died

In the section on baroque music, it refers to "1750, the year of the death of George Frideric Handel along with Johann Sebastian Bach". In fact, only Bach died in 1750; Handel died in 1759. The writer may have been confusing this with the fact that both Bach and Handel (and also Scarlatti) were all born in 1685. I think that this section needs a slight adjustment to fit these facts, but I am unable to make this adjustment at the moment. Is there anyone else who could rewrite this section? —Preceding unsigned comment added by J.Gowers (talk • contribs) 15:21, 9 November 2007 (UTC)

Chronology

Al-Farabi is included under "ancient" music. Wouldn't he be considered medieval? -Rosywounds (talk) 02:19, 2 January 2008 (UTC)

Music and Genetics

Let me first say I am not a racist/social darwinist/nazi/asshole whatever. But I think there might be some connection between genes/national origin and what you like. I, for instance, am German/Scandinavian in ancestry and love hard rock/ heavy metal, and my friends of Northern and Eastern European origin like similar stuff, and Norway, Finland and Germany make lots of Metal. And the whole African diaspora has created music with similar rhythms worldwide. Does anyone know of any source where I might find stuff on this?Cameron Nedland (talk) 16:05, 25 January 2008 (UTC)

Start with google, then email some professors.Meow meow - purr purr (talk) 10:42, 19 March 2008 (UTC)

Check out Kofi Agawu's article "The Invention of 'African Rhythm'" in the Journal of the American Musicological Society, Vol. 48, No. 3, Music Anthropologies and Music Histories. (Autumn, 1995), pp. 380-395. See also essentialism. Hyacinth (talk) 08:33, 23 March 2008 (UTC)

Bias

Why is this article so biased to Classical EUROPEAN music. This is such crap. This article as long as it is, does not even take into cognizance that we have 6 continents with people living on them. A short description on the nature of their own music with sublinks would be nice. This article needs serious editing. It's a shame. —Preceding unsigned comment added by Borninbronx10 (talk • contribs) 10:37, 7 March 2008 (UTC)

Completely agreed! Unfortunately this is the way that music is taught at a tertiary level at the moment, the rest of the world is relegated to "world music" or "ethnomusicological" units of study. Perhaps the "history" section of this article could (as suggested) list musical history by region of the world: Europe, Africa, South America, North America, Australasia, Continental Asia, South East Asia, Middle East, India. The difficulty is where to draw the line without making the article too unwiledy and long and how to define these regions. It could be argued that music history be moved to a different article all together (mind you History of music is just as Euro-centric).Meow meow - purr purr (talk) 10:51, 19 March 2008 (UTC)

Is Wikipedia confined to articles that present topics the same way Western university do? Could you link to an explanation of this Wikipedia rule for me? I did not know the Western world owned music. I think it does not. How sad for readers to come to a general article about music in the 21st century and find that music is owned by a rather small portion of the world. --Blechnic (talk) 06:53, 23 March 2008 (UTC)

Ach! That's not what I was saying. And there is no wikipedia rule to the best of my knowledge. I AGREE that the article is not universal enough, I'm just saying it's unfortunate that there is a Euro-centric approach to tertiary music study. Meow meow - purr purr (talk) 13:42, 23 March 2008 (UTC)

This article should come with this label, but it cannot be edited. Too many non-Western university students mentioning there was music in their country 1000 years ago? Perhaps.

Please sign your posts on talk pages per Wikipedia:Sign your posts on talk pages. Thanks! In regards to content see Wikipedia:POV and Wikipedia:Cite sources. It should be easy to find sources which indicate that non-European or Euro-American music be covered and sources which cover them and they may be used to build a better article. Perhaps if you draw up a list of the specific gaps or flaws in the current article that would help others with assisting you improve the article. Hyacinth (talk) 08:39, 23 March 2008 (UTC)

See #Popular music section, above. Hyacinth (talk) 08:40, 23 March 2008 (UTC)

I have placed a {Geographical imbalance} tag on this page. Meow meow - purr purr (talk) 13:50, 23 March 2008 (UTC)

Thank you, Meow meow purr purr for posting the geographical imbalance.

I did sign my post. But please don't open dialogues by scolding the other party like I am doing here. It serves no purpose. You can also check the history if you need to know who posted a comment.

Specific gaps and flaws? Start with the history of music, it is missing Africa, China, Japan, the Middle East, pop music (really!), musical theater, the folk music history of the world (funny since the big history of music event for folk is the American Smithsonian Institute's 20th c. recordings), the folk music of the Caribbean, the British Isles, the African drum and its diaspora along with its peoples in the 19th and 20th c., and focuses almost exclusively on Europe until the 20th century. Musical theater probably had a bigger and more lasting influence on Western music thus far than rap music, certainly pop has. But give the rappers a hand for at least getting this form of music in their among the European orchestras and chambers.

"Medieval and Renaissance Europe, European Baroque, European Classical, and Romantic" are not the history of music they are the history of European music and the history of Western music.

--Blechnic (talk) 20:17, 23 March 2008 (UTC)

First, sorry you feel scolded, but you shouldn't since I was only informing you of a guideline. If you signed your comment, where did your signature go?

Second, calm down. To assume that I'm a classical music fan out to save my prized artifacts from contamination by music theater and throat singing is dead wrong. Read my next comments less defensively.

Unfortunately, musicology itself is an ethnocentric and biased discipline. "Music history" actually is only European music history. "Ethnomusicology" covers the rest of the world. This is, I know first hand, the way it is still taught at least in the University music department I consider my personal hell. :Wikipedia, however, is not limited to the way things are taught. Rather, content in Wikipedia must be verifiable. You may think of it as Wikipedia being limited to sources which may be cited. See Wikipedia:Verifiablity and Wikipedia:Cite sources. Hyacinth (talk) 21:00, 23 March 2008 (UTC)

Semi-Protection

This talk page needs to mention why the article is semi-protected so that only established users may edit it. Why is it so? Hyacinth (talk) 08:43, 23 March 2008 (UTC)

Good question. I asked that it be unprotected. --Blechnic (talk) 20:20, 23 March 2008 (UTC)

Irregardless of whether it stays protected or not an article being protected should be discussed on the article talk page. Given the lack of that discussion I also support un-protecting the page. Hyacinth (talk) 20:44, 23 March 2008 (UTC)

Checking the protection history it was blocked in Nov 2007 due to heavy IP vandalism. I have removed the protection. Hyacinth (talk) 21:06, 23 March 2008 (UTC)

Thanks. I dont recall what I was thinking at the time, but I doubt I intended to leave it this long. Thanks for unprotecting it. John Vandenberg (talk) 22:26, 23 March 2008 (UTC)

Lead again

I do not think Wackymacs's recent change to the lead was an improvement, being an account of one school of thought about what music ought to be. The sounds do not have to be vocal or instrumental, and the classification of the individual sounds does not usefully define the difference between music and non-music. Beauty is in the eye of the beholder, and in any case some musicians go out of their way to create sounds that are not "beautiful" in the usual sense. The same goes for emotion. If you're going to mention beauty and emotion, then you must mention intellectual engagement too, and not all music strives for that either. Some music is monodic, and even sounding together does not always produce sounds that can be analysed as "harmony". I think "art form where the medium is sound" summed it up in a much more general and neutral way, without requiring paragraphs of qualification and explanation. Does anyone else have a view? --RobertG ♬ talk 14:30, 12 April 2008 (UTC)

Alright, but either way, the lead needs to, at some point in time, end up about 2-3 paragraphs long to fully summarize this article as per WP:LEAD. — Wackymacs (talk) 14:51, 12 April 2008 (UTC)

Since you accept my objection, I'll put the old lead back for now. But I completely agree with your suggestion that eventually it should summarise the article. --RobertG ♬ talk 15:47, 12 April 2008 (UTC)

68.193.61.237 (talk) 20:57, 19 June 2008 (UTC) I don't think rap needs to be accomodated in serious article about music.

Why not? Is there something inferior about it? --Wolf m corcoran (talk) 00:52, 23 June 2008 (UTC)

History section

The history section devotes one sentence to the entirety of popular music. I don't know whether to laugh or cry. Zazaban (talk) 05:29, 24 July 2008 (UTC)

Music is from all cultures, not just Europe

Hi, Some observers might wonder what my trimming and slimming of the European music history section was about. Well, despite the bias towards only (or mostly) telling the story of Western music in many encyclopedias in articles that purport to be a general article on "music" or "music history", I argue it shouldn't be done this way. If you want to talk exclusively about European art music, that can be done in the article on that topic. I argue that the "Music" article should address the different types of music, of which European art music (Bach, Beethoven, Brahms, etc) is just a part. I hope to add sections on music from other cultures (Arab, African, Asian), to get a more balanced picture. Apologies for the rambling...it is late here...  : ) OnBeyondZebrax (talk) 02:18, 13 October 2008 (UTC)

Music Theory

Modal theory is something that helps us understand how scales work. It helps us understand the relationship between scales and how they work together as one to achieve the goal. The reason they are called "modes" is they are not actually completely different scales, but rather different "modes" of the same scale. To start, the names of the modes must be learned and memorized. The names of these seven modes MUST be memorized and they must be memorized IN ORDER.

They are (in order) : Ionian (i-o-nee-in) Dorian (door-e-in) Phrygian (fridge-e-in) Lydian (lid-e-in) Mixolydian (mix-o-lid-e-in) Aeolian (a-o-lee-in) Locrian (lo-cree-in) —Preceding Waterfallsrus (talk) 13:30, 17 October 2008 (UTC)

What you describe only pertains to traditional Western music, as other areas of the globe have used/use other, entirely unrelated scales. SharkD (talk) 19:24, 18 February 2009 (UTC)

This sentence

Can anyone make sense of this sentence?

During the Medieval music era (500-1400), the only European repertory which has survived from before about 800 is the monophonic liturgical plainsong of the Roman Catholic Church, the central tradition of which was called Gregorian chant.

Constan69 (talk) 01:19, 19 October 2008 (UTC)

I find it clear enough, although the phrase before the first comma does not fit well with what follows: No European music from earlier than around the year 800 has survived, except for the purely melodic unaccompanied choir music used in the worship services of the Roman Catholic Church, the most historically important part of which is the body of music known as Gregorian Chant. Fenneck (talk) 16:43, 30 October 2008 (UTC)

Should that instead be "...later known as Gregorian Chant." Or, was it known by that name at that time? SharkD (talk) 19:22, 18 February 2009 (UTC)

{{Music portal}}

I suggest that this template be changed to a {{sidebar}} or incorporated somehow into {{Performing arts}}. SharkD (talk) 19:21, 18 February 2009 (UTC)

Musicians and Hearing Loss

I have recently written a very short paragraph about hearing loss for musicians. I was wondering if it would be ok to place it into this article as a separate section, maybe near the end? Thanks! Hsh8 (talk) 20:38, 15 June 2009 (UTC)

Addition of biblical period

Since it's hard to tell, wanted to point out that nothing was deleted, just rearranged to new sections. The biblical period section is the only new material. I was surprised to find this period not covered so added this material which I hope is appropriate. --Wikiwatcher1 (talk) 22:33, 16 August 2009 (UTC)

I don't think a section on the "biblical period" is warranted, particularly because the supporting evidence cited is solely from the bible and biblical scholarship. This should be incorporated under the "Antiquity" section and shortened to one or two sentences beginning with "According to Judeo-Christian tradition..." Usernamely (talk) 19:06, 30 October 2009 (UTC)

I must agree with "Usernamely". This section is highly problematic and unhelpfully culturally specific. Firstly, the historical or factual evidence supporting the section and its quotes is highly questionable and unproven. Moreover, the section is of relevance chiefly only to those approaching the subject from a strictly biblical, rather than musical, perspective. Accordingly, as we have absolutely no way of knowing what it even sounded like, I suggest it adds nothing to the subject (music). All it in fact tells us is that people at the time the scriptures were written played music and used it heavily in a religious context, something far from unique to them. Indeed, it seems a fact common to all cultures and religions the world over. A statement of this sort in the "Antiquity" section would seem to suffice, as "Usernamely" proposes - perhaps supported by, at most, a single biblical example. JSN2849 (talk) 01:10, 10 November 2009 (UTC)

u forgot something

where is hip-hop ? 193.135.75.131 (talk) 12:40, 19 August 2009 (UTC)

This whole article is devoid completely of any form of modern popular music, not just hip hop. It is an article devoted exclusively to classical traditions. Zazaban (talk) 22:48, 29 August 2009 (UTC)

Okay, they've added two paragraphs since I was here last, but it's still pathetically inadequate. The average layperson is probably more familiar with popular music than with classical traditions, why is so little time dedicated to it? I really, really, sincerely want to assume good faith, but this strikes me as snobbery. Zazaban (talk) 22:53, 29 August 2009 (UTC)

classical music is more significant in music history, you don't see any textbook that explain about american instant musics, It's because american music is insignificant as modern era is seen as era that america that has undeveloped music culture affects more advanced music world with commercialized music business . I should complain about how this whole article is inadequate explaining musics overall, but he pay too much attention to American instant pop music.

It's fails to define music

Music primarily brings a deep joy and satisfaction to our lives. It's an emotional thing. I think an opening paragraph on music should state, if not stress, this. Aliens might not get the point otherwise :) petelock (talk) 00:53, 21 September 2009 (UTC)

Not all music does that. See Throbbing Gristle, Avant-garde music, and such for example. Zazaban (talk) 09:34, 21 September 2009 (UTC)

Neuromusicology

I'm working on a new article and want to invite anyone knowledgeable about the field to add to it.

"http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Schyler/Neuromusicology"

schyler (talk) 16:28, 1 December 2009 (UTC)

Music Therapy

Although I dont know very much about the subject of Music Therapy, Does anyone else think it should have some sort of link on this page? I dont think it needs a full section but maybe a link in the see also part. Dangerhertz 14:47 9 April 2006 (UTC)

I don't know to much about it personally by my mom is a nurse and she says they use it all the time in hospitals and nursing homes. For the nursing homes they play music from the patients younger days and it stimulates there memory and lifts there moods. Or so they say! —Preceding unsigned comment added by Musicfanatic10 (talk • contribs) 14:36, 6 March 2010 (UTC)

Researching the links between melody and the mind indicates that listening to and playing music actually can alter our brains, and therefore our bodies. It seems that the healing power of music, over body and spirit, is only just starting to be understood, even though music therapy is not new. For many years therapists have been using music - both listening and study - for the reduction of stress, and the relief of pain. And music has also been recommended as an aid for positive change in mood and emotional states. Michael DeBakey, who in 1966 became the first surgeon to successfully implant an artificial heart. Doctors now believe using music therapy in hospitals and nursing homes not only makes people feel better, but also makes them heal faster. And across the nation, medical experts are beginning to apply the new revelations about music’s impact on the brain to treating patients. http://www.chordpiano.com/articles-chord-piano/music-emotions-4.htm Cel101 (talk) by (UTC)Cel March 16, 2010 11:45 pm

Music style influence RFC

Howdy, I didn't know where else to post this request so I'm putting it here. If you know a better place for it, please feel free to move it.

The article Contemporary Jewish religious music has a section on important and influential figures. Rather than it become an edit war with everyone putting in their favorite singer or band, I've opened a discussion about the section and would appreciate your comments and thoughts at: Talk:Contemporary_Jewish_religious_music#Important_figures. Thanks, Joe407 (talk) 18:34, 9 January 2010 (UTC)

tv show

i saw a recent tv show on channel4 uk which said that humans are pre set to like music the same way we are to learn a language user bouse23 1330 december3rd 2006 gmt

there'd have to be some non-human made music to really test that.

Automate archiving?

Does anyone object to me setting up automatic archiving for this page using MiszaBot? Unless otherwise agreed, I would set it to archive threads that have been inactive for 30 days and keep the last ten threads.--Oneiros (talk) 21:11, 9 January 2010 (UTC)

 Done--Oneiros (talk) 00:59, 13 January 2010 (UTC)

"biblical"

The biblical period needs to be either removed or changed. Changed so that the emphasis is not placed upon Judeo-Christian Western society so that the section then reads "Mythological References" and can include mythological references from all cultures, not just Judeo-Christian or removed altogether because it adds nothing to the articles content (about MUSIC not RELIGIOUS material) and draws away from the topic (I repeat: MUSIC).

I will draw up a list in the next few weeks of mythological references of music and musical instruments to be presented here, if anyone else knows any obscure one's (not Orpheus and the like) then please present them so the new section of "Mythological References of Music" can be worked on.

If however there is too much contentious debate between "myth" and "biblical" I strongly suggest the aforementioned section of "Biblical References" is removed due to it's lack of neutrality.

Bebopsavvy (talk) 22:28, 28 January 2010 (UTC)

Music in Health Care

I don't know to much about it personally by my mom is a nurse and she says they use it all the time in hospitals and nursing homes. For the nursing homes they play music from the patients younger days and it stimulates there memory and lifts there moods. Or so they say! —Preceding unsigned comment added by Musicfanatic10 (talk • contribs) 14:44, 6 March 2010 (UTC)

Wikipedia:WikiProject Music

This project could use more activity. --_{Piotr Konieczny aka Prokonsul Piotrus| talk} 21:33, 31 March 2010 (UTC)

Inclusion of sound snippets

I am aware of the wiki tenant of boldness, but I would like to hear from others on the subject of including actual sound snippets on the page before I start adding music willy nilly. I suggest we choose some music from what we already have. I would also encourage outside sources as well! Hmccasla (talk) 06:18, 14 April 2010 (UTC)Hmccasla

Emotions

Three different types of music was tested and here are the results Classical music can actually make people smarter, or if children are exposed they are said to benefit in mental development. Rock and roll music made people joyful, friendly, relaxed and calm’” Rap and hip hop music can make people violence, sexuality, and drug use. I think this can be true but with the Rap and hip hop statement is a lie because when I listened to hip hop i feel just calm and I also get my work done easier. but although some hip hop music does talk about sex and drugs it doesn't mean that your gonna d othe same thing. —Preceding unsigned comment added by 12.200.50.34 (talk) 16:41, 7 May 2010 (UTC)

• http://www.users.muohio.edu/shermalw/edp101as07/Group1a_Gi-project09.doc

Cel101 (talk)(UTC)Cel March 16,2010 12:00 am

This is not entirely true. Some forms of music do not display and form of emotions. Applechair (talk) 05:30, 13 April 2010 (UTC)

Editing Talk:Music

Music is an art form whose medium/\/i\s/\/s\//\\//o///un\,/d. ^is the air. The vibrations eminating from the musical instrument cause synchronous vibrations in the air. When the vibrations hit a receptor, that receptor begins to vibrate in step with the air wave. Where that receptor is your eardrum, that vibrates in phase with the airwave that have hit it. The vibration of your eardrum is what you hear as music after it has been translated in your ear, to electrical waves that your brain produces from those vibrations. — Stanley Feist ("""") drscfeist@gmail.com —Preceding unsigned comment added by 184.32.3.88 (talk) 17:57, 14 July 2010 (UTC)

Edit requested

I cannot edit this page for some reason. But one of the first sentences is "Ancient music can only be imagined by scholars, based on findings from a range of paleolithic sites, such as bones in which lateral holes have been pierced: these are usually identified as flutes,[4] blown at one end like the Japanese shakuhachi." Can someone change the colon to a semicolon? Colons are grammatically only supposed to introduce lists of items. Semicolons are used for coordination. Baron Von Tarkin (talk) 01:59, 27 July 2010 (UTC)

 Done Good catch. Winston365 (talk) 03:59, 27 July 2010 (UTC)

Edit requested in Nattiez-quotation

I think there is something wrong with the quotation in the introduction. I simply can't find the last part of the quote (the part after the last comma: "except that it is 'sound through time'") in the book by Jean Jacques-Nattiez. Has someone just made this up, or are there different versions of the book? 90.185.20.142 (talk) 12:24, 29 July 2010 (UTC)

 Done The Nattiez quote has been corrected, trimmed of that last bit. Actually, the quote as it is listed appears half on page 48, and half on page 55. The incorrect bit about "sound through time" was somebody's interpretation of a Nattiez sentence on page 215, which states "Because music is essentially motion through time, this level may seem to turn out to be useless." I believe that the lead section works better without it. Binksternet (talk) 12:49, 29 July 2010 (UTC)

POV

The whole article seems to be music from the perspective of a kinda, composer/classical music lover/music teacher POV, i notice it lacks much modern popular music, rock/metal, rap, electronic music, loads of other genres all these things are almost absent from the page, and yet are far more popular currently than classical, tbh the whole article reeks of musical elitism to me. 81.129.54.153 (talk) 20:55, 1 December 2009 (UTC)

Put it in perspective. Popular music as we know it has been around for just over 50 years, which is a tiny amount of time. This article is devoted to the fundamental properties of music and the history of music; and in the latter category, popular music seems well-represented in context. There's a much larger article for it as a separate entity. --JDOCallaghan (talk) 13:22, 22 February 2010 (UTC)

Let's rephrase then: The whole article seems to lack much historical and modern folk and popular music, and much if any world music, covering instead mostly the common practice period of classical music. This may be elitism, geographic bias, chronological bias, educational bias, or a combination of factors. Hyacinth (talk) 06:08, 23 February 2010 (UTC)

I agree. One bias seems to be classical vs. folk. The other bias is western vs other. There is a paragraph on non-western music which is actually highlighting the bias. Western being the primary focus and everything else aggregated as non-western. The section on Indian music has left out history of folk music like Laavani, Povada. I am sure other countries in south Asia would have their own traditions.

In the sections where there is detailed info about notations etc. I would like to point out that it is not a world wide way of writing music. Indian music is written differently. I can add this section about notation if people think it is appropriate. Would not want to waste my time if it is going to be deleted Kaveri (talk) 16:33, 24 June 2010 (UTC)

Please go ahead and add it. We'll take care of deletion and vandalism. It is quite disheartening to see that people in the west believe that their music is the major music of the world and the rest are "other" music. If they ever will come out of their pops, raps and rocks, they will see a universe of non-western music out there which is as humble as is incomparably vast! The section of Western music should be merged with the rest of the existing music as well.Vaazan (talk) 09:03, 24 August 2010 (UTC)

the whole article I think seems to too much pay attention to american music genres that are not significant, any music textbook don't mention as much about american instant music genres as here, I guess it's because wikipedia is american site and american people are using it. article of modern american music weirdly have almost same length as article of classical musics? and why only american modern musics are mentioned here? there aren't any italian or arabian modern musics? The whole article seems to be music from the perspective of kind of too much american, no nationalism should be involved when mentioning about music or culture. —Preceding unsigned comment added by 70.179.82.180 (talk) 17:23, 19 January 2010 (UTC)

Since you provide no specific examples (What is an "American instant music genre"? Do you just add water and stir?) I'm not sure what exactly you mean, aside from that the article is biased towards American in general.

Personally I feel that this artical has too much about the effects of music and related studies and too litte about music theory. Applechair (talk) 05:30, 13 April 2010 (UTC)

African music missing

There is a huge void when we ignore the music of Africa, which was the first music played by humans. See this wikipedia link and determine whether or not this musical discrimination should continue: http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Music_of_Africa —Preceding unsigned comment added by 69.86.76.46 (talk) 12:04, 2 August 2010 (UTC)

Edit requested

There is some naughty words in english in the box labeled "Performing Arts". Stoivonen (talk) 20:25, 24 September 2010 (UTC)

I don't see any, perhaps they were already reverted? Nikkimaria (talk) 21:03, 24 September 2010 (UTC)

 Fixed I didn't see anything wrong at first, but there was some vandalism in the template. Fixed now, and I learned a new naughty word. :) Winston365 (talk) 21:24, 24 September 2010 (UTC)

Farabi was Persian NOT Arab

wrong information hi was born in Kazakhstan, and studied in Baghdad, then most of his books were written in Damascus & Aleppo, finally hi died in damascus, all of composing where written in arabic so how come he is Persian? !—Preceding unsigned comment added by 76.166.176.2 (talk) 04:07, 26 August 2010 (UTC)

Create new section "List of musicians"

Could someone create a new section "List of Musicians" describing everyone who has done music with a picture next to each person of that person. There are not enough pictures of people who have done music. —Preceding unsigned comment added by 212.50.171.229 (talk) 16:01, 14 November 2010 (UTC)

Have a look at Lists of musicians I have added it to the article.--Hywel Ashkenazy (talk) 12:49, 25 November 2010 (UTC)

Oriental Influence

The article has virtually no mention of the Oriental influence on music, especially the Moors and the Andalusia period. The Arabs played a massive role in the evolution of music, any contributes?! --A Gooner (talk) 00:37, 6 December 2010 (UTC)

Music

Music is the science and art of organizing sounds in a meaningful manner, where the medium is sound.

Music is a Science (i.e. Plato and his theory on music of the sphere) since the dawn of time therefore many of its faces is objective.

The above definiton of music is more satisfactory than the one that is on the actual page. In my opinion, Music should be organized, and that organization should be creative. By creative I mean that the structure or organization of the musical sounds are not always apparent at first, but can be discovered through study. In other words, since music must be organized, it can be organized in manifold ways. "Music, then, ia a utilization of melody, harmony, rhythm, form, tempo, dynamics, tone-color, and nuance, in such manner that the result produced is recognized as beautiful."Catholic1001 (talk) 03:20, 17 December 2010 (UTC)

Music is an Art and a universal language since the dawn of time therefore many of its faces is subjective.

References in the Bible The actual page says that Jubal is the "Father" of all...(Musicians). The New American Bible translates that as the "Ancestor" of all musicians. Does that change the meaning of the passage?Catholic1001 (talk) 22:30, 17 December 2010 (UTC)

why

music makes me happy —Preceding unsigned comment added by 85.115.60.180 (talk) 13:13, 14 December 2010 (UTC)

Music without sound ?

An editor who, as far as I can see, has made no contribution to this article is trying to change the lede to suggest that music does not need sound. I think such a controversial edit requires thorough discussion here before any such change is made. I'd be very interested to hear other editors' views. ♦ Jongleur¹⁰⁰ ♦ ^talk 15:08, 24 December 2010 (UTC)

That editor would be me User:Rajpaj. My contribution was an edit stating that music can be made with color, in addition to sound. This is on par with the 'scientific' definition of music. If you know anything about harmonics, then you understand wave patterns, and such; the entire basis of pitch classes, etc. Music definitely is not limited to sound alone. Even still, as you would like the first sentence to read, "an art form whose medium is sound." needs fixing because: 1) 'art form' in this case is one word (artform), 2) sound in itself is not a medium, 3) any sound that does not utilize a musicological framework should not constitute as 'music', and 4) not all art, or forms of art, recognize patterns, which is essential for musical creation. —Preceding undated comment added 03:17, 25 December 2010 (UTC).

Citations, citations. If you cannot show your work, do not change the article in such a major fashion, in a way not supported by reliable, verifiable sources. Come back when you have mainstream sources to back up your assertion. Binksternet (talk) 22:57, 25 December 2010 (UTC)

Edit request from Shweta1983, 12 January 2011

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Shweta1983 (talk) 08:40, 12 January 2011 (UTC)

Actually, this is the place to request additions to the article Music. I think what you want is Articles for creation. Please note, though, that you'll need to have reliable sources that verify that this person meets Wikipedia's guidelines for the notability of musicians. Qwyrxian (talk) 09:45, 12 January 2011 (UTC)

"whose"

While it is grammatically acceptable (as far as I know) to use whose as it is used in the first sentence, ("Music is an art form whose medium is sound.") no other articles about arts use such a turn of phrase to describe their subjects. Perhaps something a little less mystical sounding (e.g. "Music is an art form produced through sound.") would be appropriate? 198.204.141.208 (talk) 19:32, 28 January 2011 (UTC)

Edit request from MarkEpling, 15 February 2011

{{edit semi-protected}} Music [ADD Space here!]is an artform whose medium [ADD Space here!]is sound. Common elements of music are pitch(which governs melody [ADD Space here!]and harmony), rhythm(and its associated concepts tempo, meter, and articulation), dynamics, and the sonic qualities of timbre [ADD Space here!]and texture. The word derives from Greekμουσική(mousike), "(art) of the Muses."[1

Please review entire article for errors of the type indicated above.MarkEpling (talk) 21:02, 15 February 2011 (UTC)

MarkEpling (talk) 21:02, 15 February 2011 (UTC)

It turns out that the problem wasn't here at all. It was at Template:Performing arts. Fixed that and protected the template. CambridgeBayWeather (talk)

Classical music

I substitued the subtitle "Classical music" with "Asian music" since there is a classic music also in Western culture. So, the section is about classic asian music. Lele giannoni (talk) 16:31, 2 April 2011 (UTC)

Music is a tool

Music is a powerful emotional tool and is able to greatly enhance and/or change ones emotional state, and can be extremely liberating. As with all tools, if it used incorrectly it can also be emotionally damaging and destructive, therefore, one should be in control of the tool and do not let the tool control oneself. Docyr (talk) 16:40, 22 April 2011 (UTC)docyr

Music Clip's and Music News..

This is not an ad. Music sharing site. —Preceding unsigned comment added by 85.103.23.123 (talk) 22:36, 25 April 2011 (UTC)

not in citation

I cut this out;

In the 9th century, the Arab scholar [[al-Farabi]] wrote a book on music titled ''[[Kitab al-Musiqi al-Kabir]]'' ("Great Book of Music"). He played and invented a variety of [[musical instrument]]s and devised the [[Arab tone system]] of pitch organisation, which is still used in [[Arabic music]].<ref>Touma (1996), p. 170.</ref><!--Full ref of Touma missing-->{{Verify source|date=May 2011}}

the source is a good one: Touma, Habib Hassan (2003-03-01). The music of the Arabs. Hal Leonard Corporation. ISBN 9781574670813. Retrieved 31 May 2011. There is a preview that could be used to provide a better summary than what we had in the article J8079s (talk) 21:58, 31 May 2011 (UTC)

Definition of music

Hi there,

just want to open up the definition of music. "Music is an art form whose medium is sound" is not entirely correct. the medium is air, sound travels through a medium, which is air. The Canadian Oxford dictionary defines music as follows:

"The art of combining sounds to produce beauty of form, harmony, and expression of emotion."

I think "the art of combining sounds" would be a sufficient definition.

Music is a cultural art because it is culture that determines what is and isn't noise. Noise is not music. Therefore it is a culturally defined art form.

-) saxgirl — Preceding unsigned comment added by Saxgirl66 (talk • contribs) 06:09, 13 June 2011 (UTC)

Music and socioeconomic status

This section seems a little bit sloppy to me. Particularly this excerpt I've pasted below:

(Beginning of excerpt) However, in the 1980s and 1990s, musicologists studying this perceived divide between "high" and "low" musical genres argued that this distinction is not based on the musical value or quality of the different types of music.[citation needed] Rather, they argued that this distinction was based largely on the socioeconomics standing or social class of the performers or audience of the different types of music.[citation needed] For example, whereas the audience for Classical symphony concerts typically have above-average incomes, the audience for a rap concert in an inner-city area may have below-average incomes. Even though the performers, audience, or venue where non-"art" music is performed may have a lower socioeconomic status, the music that is performed, such as blues, rap, punk, funk, or ska may be very complex and sophisticated. (Conclusion of excerpt)

First of all, the tone of the article seems to change abruptly from fact-based to opinion-based. No citations are made to validate the alleged musicologists making these statements. You're under the impression that the author is vaguely trying to defend his or her favorite music from the criticism of classical music fans. The tone seems inappropriate to me. Also, it seems a stretch to say that punk, rap and ska are of equal compositional brilliance to the work of Beethoven. If there are some musicologists who believe that, I would be genuinely interested to read their analysis. But no sources are cited. Certainly, I believe that some forms of pop, rock etc. are advanced and can be considered "art music." For instance, The Beatles come to mind. Don't get me wrong, I have great appreciation for many of the genres listed, and the creativity required to produce such music. But I find the statements in this section to be very vague, editorial in nature, and lacking citations. I think they should be revised in some way. — Preceding unsigned comment added by PowerSurge1000 (talk • contribs) 21:25, 26 July 2011 (UTC)

Ocean sounds

Ocean sounds - In popular music can be experienced what I call the ocean sounds. There is Indian (maybe the Indian Ocean) such as in ragas or George Harrison. An Atlantic sound such as in Celtic music and American music. And the American sound sound such as slide guitar and in country music. The American sound is related to the Hawaiian sound (Pacific Ocean) like Ukelele. —Preceding unsigned comment added by 169.139.19.116 (talk • contribs) 11:34, 24 May 2007 music is very intresting thing which once heard the never forgotten. — Preceding unsigned comment added by 120.62.178.157 (talk) 10:31, 17 August 2011 (UTC)

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Egypt

I think there clearly should be a little section about Egypt in between the "prehistoric" and "biblical" sections. Its the first of the well documented traditions which includes instruments like the recorder that we still use today. 97.91.176.159 (talk) 18:19, 13 October 2011 (UTC)

Music Sociology

The section titled Sociology should be removed. There are no citations, the verbage appears highly opinionated, and based on perceptions of an individual.

For example, what is the factual basis of the statement: "For example, whereas the audience for Classical symphony concerts typically have above-average incomes, the audience for a rap concert in an inner-city area may have below-average incomes. Even though the performers, audience, or venue where non-"art" music is performed may have a lower socioeconomic status, the music that is performed, such as blues, rap, punk, funk, or ska may be very complex and sophisticated." ??

This is simply a class versus class opinion, with no fact. I personally am of the opinion that the exact opposite is true of the entire section, but my opinion would be as irrelevant as this section's is.

Since it violates all three Wikipedia article policies (no original research, neutral point of view, and verifiability) this section titled Sociology should be deleted in it's entirety.

Hvacrmaster (talk) 01:53, 12 January 2012 (UTC)

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music doesnt need to be made by a human, thus its not art, it can be also occur by natural sounds, its not objective,

should call it as organized sequence of acoustic sound

it doesnt need "artists"

subjective p of shi t

no conservative views here — Preceding unsigned comment added by 85.26.183.173 (talk) 04:57, 23 February 2012 (UTC)

link to music history

The music history talk page requested why it was an orphan, the link on this music page was hidden under an alternate name historical musicology, so I linked music history, mentioned four or five times ( only linked the first instance).O=MC⁴ 03:42, 20 June 2012 (UTC)

Sumeria

Oh my god!, and it feels like Sumeria has nothing to do with music!, you can note that Sumerian's relations with music is much older than greek!, clearly this is heavily biased!. — Preceding unsigned comment added by 46.18.152.150 (talk) 13:33, 27 June 2012 (UTC)

Instead of complaining, why don't you supply the research about music in Sumeria so that people can add it to the article? -- Ssilvers (talk) 22:58, 23 August 2012 (UTC)

See Music of Mesopotamia. Hyacinth (talk) 03:26, 24 August 2012 (UTC)

Edit request on 3 October 2012

The researcher Valorie Salimpoor, listed in the text of the article, is incorrectly identified as being affiliated with the University of Montreal. In fact, she works at the Montreal Neurological Institute of McGill University. This can be verified by looking at the published article that the piece refers to; so it should be corrected. Thank you Musicbrain (talk) 01:47, 3 October 2012 (UTC)

•  Done Michaelzeng7 (talk) 19:52, 4 October 2012 (UTC)

Requested article: history of music

This used to redirect to History of classical music traditions. I've redirected it to the history section of this article, which I believe should serve as the basis of a new article. Thoughts? --_{Piotr Konieczny aka Prokonsul Piotrus| reply here} 22:37, 11 October 2012 (UTC)

I think the basis of a new article sounds like an interesting idea. The History of Music article would be helpful so we can find information on all the aspects music from the ancient times up to the present. Lord Sjones23 (talk - contributions) 03:17, 12 October 2012 (UTC)

Indeed. The Hocmt article is a good start, but it deals only with classical music. We need something that summarize it (while covering more than the main music article in its history section), and expand on the history of more modern music at the same time. --_{Piotr Konieczny aka Prokonsul Piotrus| reply here} 16:03, 12 October 2012 (UTC)

I agree with this suggestion. I also want to point out that in the history section, there is a link that says "Main Article: History of music," but the link just takes you back to the same section. By all means, I would love to see a History of Music article, but in the meantime, that link needs to be taken out. 71.58.209.95 (talk) 19:11, 12 October 2012 (UTC)

Good catch. I've changed it to Further for History of classical music traditions. --_{Piotr Konieczny aka Prokonsul Piotrus| reply here} 22:30, 12 October 2012 (UTC)

What happened to my idea?

?? — Preceding unsigned comment added by 66.154.147.79 (talk) 20:27, 11 January 2013 (UTC)

Music Energy

www.music.com.tr — Preceding unsigned comment added by 217.131.180.84 (talk) 12:46, 20 January 2013 (UTC)

visit site http://musicenergy.org for more information

Music — Preceding unsigned comment added by 149.3.129.30 (talk) 17:14, 3 January 2013 (UTC)

Scientific Research

One of the sections of the article is entitled Scientific Research. As the section seems to deal with the physiological effects of music on humans, I suggest the title be changed to be more specific. — Preceding unsigned comment added by Derwos (talk • contribs) 12:49, 28 January 2013 (UTC)

I changed it to "Cognition and psychology". --Λeternus ^(talk) 08:43, 29 January 2013 (UTC)

Edit request on 9 February 2013

Please make the "main image" of the article (i think it's this item: "250px-Music_lesson_Staatliche_Antikensammlungen_2421.jpg") accessible by Facebook, as in Facebook's link to the wiki article on "Film"/"Movies" (at https://www.facebook.com/#!/pages/Movies/106057162768533) - note how Facebook utilizes the main image from the "Film"/"Movies" wiki article page as a thumbnail image across Facebook, as in "Likes," "Interests," etc. Thank you. 75.72.24.114 (talk) 15:28, 9 February 2013 (UTC)

Not done: Wikipedia has no control over what a 3rd party site displays, I suggest you contact Facebook. - Happysailor ^(Talk) 20:16, 9 February 2013 (UTC)

The image you suggest is in the public domain. Here it is: File:Music lesson Staatliche Antikensammlungen 2421.jpg. Anybody can use it for any purpose, including Facebook. There is nothing further for Wikipedia to do here. Binksternet (talk) 20:19, 9 February 2013 (UTC)

add language to category list

hoping that someone could add language to the category list of music Wakawka (talk) 08:30, 29 March 2013 (UTC)

There are musical languages, and there is a category for articles about them, but these are languages that use musical sounds as their phonetics (loosely speaking). I don't think we should add a language category to the present article, because it deals with music as music, not as language. --Stfg (talk) 16:54, 29 March 2013 (UTC)

Why no CC examples anywhere on Wiki...

can someone tell me why there are no creative commons examples of music? you can read about it all day but this isnt a textbook if you get my drift...184.99.123.6 (talk) 22:35, 4 June 2013 (UTC)

Credit for courses in music at uni level

The article states that "At the university level, students in most arts and humanities programs can receive credit for taking music courses". I am wondering whether this isn't particularly an American phenomenon? At Danish universities (which are those of which I have knowledge), for instance, you chose major directly after high school which you will stick with until you chose a minor in your third year - you can't pick and chose different subjects and end up with a degree. Thus if you want a musical element in your degree, you will have to chose a major or minor in musicology - or no music at all except in your spare time as part of a university or otherwise choir/band/orchestra/etc. --NuclearWarhead (talk) 23:53, 11 March 2013 (UTC)

Our colleges aren't as organized as the Danish universities....you kind of pointlessly meander through subjects with little or no guidance and hope somehting sticks...that's been my experience.184.99.123.6 (talk) 22:37, 4 June 2013 (UTC)

Assuming the June reply above is from America, I think the reply is a bit overstating the typical situation in an American college or university. There are a number of courses which are probably restricted to music majors and minors, either specifically or by requiring some prerequisite or demonstrated level of proficiency. And then there are likely to be some more general, beginning level courses like "music appreciation" or "music history" open to all students. Degree programs typically require a number of hours of elective courses and a student can use such basic courses in satisfying these requirements. Wschart (talk) 10:51, 22 August 2013 (UTC)

Additional External Link Recommended

Hi, I think that http://www.imusicdictionary.com should be added as a link. It is another free online music dictionary, but also has an app for mobile devices.

Thank you. 74.109.118.148 (talk) 14:23, 28 October 2013 (UTC) Adam Roseland Adam@rojaweb.com

Mesopotamia

Thank you whoever wrote this article on Music for not including in any parts nothing on Mesopotamian role in Music. After all what did those guys at the “cradle of civilization” done for us?! Of course I am being sarcastic, I always enjoy how “they” mention Egypt go to Greek and move on to their little white power Europe… — Preceding unsigned comment added by Ashurbanipal23 (talk • contribs) 14:59, 4 October 2013 (UTC)

So fix it! If I recall, the lack of concrete evidence of mesopotamia is the reason why it is covered so sparsely. Wikipedia shouldn't be going on speculation and their is enough of that in the Ancient Egypt articles already. Well, that is slowly, but surely being addressed. Verifiability and not WP:TRUTH and all. 209.255.230.32 (talk) 13:14, 8 November 2013 (UTC)

Issues with article

Prehistoric means no written record... why is there a written record in the prehistoric section? And the Indus Civilization is in recorded history. Ravanahatha is not listed a prehistoric instrument either. This would be well within recorded history. ChrisGualtieri (talk) 17:50, 10 November 2013 (UTC)

Image

Not sure where i can place this, but its just uploaded, and really nice

Gerard van honthorst - the concert - 1623

Mercurywoodrose (talk) 03:32, 11 January 2014 (UTC)

CfD nomination of Category:Music geography

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Definition

It can also be the absence of rhythm.

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music

Music is the essence of life Pratham Agarwal (talk) 07:23, 28 December 2014 (UTC)

Semi-protected edit request on 15 January 2015

Can I please have an edit thing so I can make sure the things on this website are accurate? CoryE2001 (talk) 23:57, 15 January 2015 (UTC)

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Music

music is a pattern of notes that repeats until u can't stand it. Some people like the same pattern of notes to play for them over and over and over again. i think they are weird but you know everybody is different! so don't judge people.

71.170.230.69 (talk) 00:53, 16 January 2015 (UTC)

Semi-protected edit request on 15 February 2015

"developmenal"

66.74.176.59 (talk) 07:50, 15 February 2015 (UTC)

Done Stickee (talk) 08:31, 15 February 2015 (UTC)

Semi-protected edit request on 12 July 2015

Music,Singer Official 01:43, 12 July 2015 (UTC)

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Minor fixes

• Replace {{Portal bar|Music}} with {{Portal|Music}} and put it in the usual place
• Fix the ref cite that is incorrectly at the head of the reflist. 203.173.186.163 (talk) 23:43, 17 August 2015 (UTC)

Done Stickee (talk) 00:12, 18 August 2015 (UTC)

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change ((vamp)) to ((Vamp (music)|vamp))

I've piped the link to ostinato#Vamp, which is where vamp (music) redirects to. --Nicknack009 (talk) 18:28, 17 October 2015 (UTC)

Definition

"Music is an art form, social activity or cultural activity whose medium is sound and silence." I would love to see a citation for this, if possible, as it's such a good definition. CursoryB (talk) 16:16, 19 November 2015 (UTC)

Boo — Preceding unsigned comment added by 71.35.141.247 (talk) 22:50, 28 December 2015 (UTC)

The sentence incorrectly conflates distinctly different phenomena. The problem is that "social activity or cultural activity" are not music, but actions taken by people that may or may not involve music or any number of other things such as conversation, sports, scientific collaboration, etc. It can also be an entirely private or personal activity, and so not social at all. It does seem that all music can be associated with a given culture and is often listed as a cultural universal, but as the next sentence in the article shows, our general concept of music is about qualities and aspects of sound and silence: "The common elements of music are pitch (which governs melody and harmony), rhythm (and its associated concepts tempo, meter, and articulation), dynamics (loudness and softness), and the sonic qualities of timbre and texture (which are sometimes termed the "color" of a musical sound)." Making and listening to music can be a cultural activity, but music as a phenomena is probably better described as "Music is an art form whose medium is sound and silence and depends on cultural context to be recognized as music." See Definition of music for more thorough discussion. --Jacques Bailhé 18:01, 4 January 2016 (UTC)

"A song is considered the smallest standalone work of music"

I'd like to discuss the second sentence of this article, which currently reads: "Generally, a song is considered the smallest standalone work of music, especially when involving singing." I don't really feel from personal experience that this is the case, and it would be great to see some sort of citation just to establish "is considered the smallest standalone work of music." That fact isn't even reflected or included in the page on Song. Furthermore, in what way is a song "smallest"? In performers? In time? Some other measure? "Songs" can last longer than symphonies in some cases, and there are many genres and criteria of song across cultures. I study classical music, and I know that "piece" is not exactly standard usage, but if such a statement is to be made about "song" then it should be reflected also that "piece" is the term widely in use in classical music. Overall, I find the sentence to be unhelpful and even meaningless, but I would like to know what other people think. Maybe replace it with something that expresses a "full range" of forms of music-making, like "Standalone works of music can span from x to y numbers of performers, and m to n length"? Brian heim composer (talk) 19:25, 14 September 2015 (UTC)

Just removed the sentence for the reasons I included above. I'd be happy to discuss if someone disagrees, but it just doesn't seem like it contributes much toward an overall understanding of the topic. Brian heim composer (talk) 23:02, 14 September 2015 (UTC)

I think you make good points and agree the sentence was unhelpful. --Jacques Bailhé 18:31, 4 January 2016 (UTC)

Mesopotamia

Thank you whoever wrote this article on Music for not including in any parts nothing on Mesopotamian role in Music. After all what did those guys at the “cradle of civilization” done for us?! Of course I am being sarcastic, I always enjoy how “they” mention Egypt go to Greek and move on to their little white power Europe…

You're right about this problem of neglecting much of anything before Greece and this is something I've been trying to fix. Cheers to you and I hope you'll keep pressing the issue wherever it comes up. Part of the problem is that so many authoritative and influential texts were written either before more recent discoveries and research or, regrettably, from the parochial, Western-centric POV that has fouled up so much scholarly in so many fields work for soooo long. I hope that most current writers aren't intending to preserve these silly ideas, but are just unaware of what we now know, so I do my best to suggest corrections with that in mind. --Jacques Bailhé 18:41, 4 January 2016 (UTC)

First sentence confusing

"Music is an art form whose medium is sound and silence and depends on cultural context to be recognized as music"

This seems cumbersome and confusing. Specifically the latter half, from "and depends", seems to be unnecessary information that should be somewhere else in the article. The definition is also circular, basically saying "Music is something recognized as music". Ljshamz (talk) 23:04, 4 January 2016 (UTC)

If you see the comments in the section directly above, maybe you'll agree this sentence is better than what was there. If not, please go ahead and revert. Defining music is, of course, a thorny problem. See Definition of music. Although I think the the original sentence was incorrect as it read, it raised an interesting point about cultural context, discussed in greater detail later in the lead. What is and is not music is often a question of cultural context. --Jacques Bailhé 02:36, 5 January 2016 (UTC)

On further thinking, I agree with Ljshamz and have revised the opening sentence accordingly. --Jacques Bailhé 19:47, 10 January 2016 (UTC)

Semi-protected edit request on 12 January 2016

Grammar and needs more information

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Link the sound and silence. 5.39.128.209 (talk) 06:31, 14 January 2016 (UTC)

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Just do this. Music is an art form whose medium is sound and silence

We usually don't link terms that are generally understood by most readers in context. See WP:OVERLINK -- Chamith (talk) 09:53, 14 January 2016 (UTC)

Semi-protected edit request on 5 February 2016

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The BBC Blast Music link is broken, I have found the link that does work - http://www.bbc.co.uk/blast/. This should be used instead of the web archive link that is currently being used. 2605:6000:3080:5500:8586:5975:FD53:5FB3 (talk) 20:02, 13 June 2016 (UTC)

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shouts of thanks

Hello!!!!!! Wikipedian's I am just want to give thanks to you for using this free encyclopedia, and I think we must add video's in this encyclopedia Mmagwe small (talk) 19:19, 11 July 2016 (UTC)

music in botswana

In Botswana music is very enjoyed because they listen there traditional music which they call tsutsube, setup and hosana Mmagwe small (talk) 19:10, 11 July 2016 (UTC)

Sounds like Music of Botswana has room for expansion! Sparafucil (talk) 09:24, 12 July 2016 (UTC)

Remarks about John Cage in the lead

I have to be careful here to make sure my point is clear. It's about the placement of

However, 20th-century composer John Cage thought that any sound can be music, saying, for example, "There is no noise, only sound."

at the end of the first paragraph. I am not denying the accuracy of this statement, or entering any discussion about the nature of any of Cage's work, but whether this is the best place for the statement about what Cage thought. It has already been writ in the very first sentence of the page that its "..medium is sound and silence." which is what Cage has said there, so there is nothing new about that - noise is also sound. There must be a section of the article in which this sentence is appropriate and important. I think the lead paragraph is not the place for mention of a specific (and ground-breaking) example of a class of music-making: however I have seen that the sentence about Cage is the antithesis of the sentence before it about harmony of the spheres, so it is fitting in that view. I keep well away from any discussion about whether noise is music - a rat's nest of opinions and science.P0mbal (talk) 11:54, 14 July 2016 (UTC)

Semi-protected edit request on 18 July 2016

In the section titled "Public Domain" of the article "Music":

"Music on public domain is all the music created since origins of human beings to first decades of 20th century, and also every musical record that belongs to public domain because it was on public domain since it creation or because it copyright expires. Public domain music can be copied, edited, modified, and sold without any restriction, it makes this music the best resource for musical education."

In the first sentence, please make the "it" before "creation" and the "it" before "because" possessive, i.e. "its". In the same sentence, please make "expires" past tense to match the tense of the sentence, i.e. "expired". In the last sentence, please change the comma before "it" to a semicolon; the sentence currently has a comma splice.

This is not grammar related, but if possible, could ", and also" in the first sentence be changed to "as well as" to make the sentence smoother?

2605:6000:E7CA:500:C065:DB61:2AA0:6240 (talk) 23:54, 18 July 2016 (UTC)

There were more problems than grammar: like Public domain music it didn't give much of an overview. I retitled the section and placed it after the business section. It's unfortunately a bit US-centric, and of course written by a non-lawyer. Sparafucil (talk) 01:55, 19 July 2016 (UTC)

Semi-protected edit request on 28 July 2016

I couldn’t help but notice that your link to an article about American Foundation of Musicians on your page is no longer live. You may want to remove their URL from your article: http://www.afm.org/public/about/history.php

Here’s a screenshot of where the link is located: https://www.dropbox.com/s/dmbix3wphhm5yb2/Wiki.JPG?dl=0

And change the deadlink with this https://speakstick.net/blogs/speakstick/american-federation-of-musicians-timeline-and-accomplishments

Thank you!

AlenApril (talk) 00:20, 28 July 2016 (UTC)

Partly done: I have fixed the link with an archived version from the Internet Archive. Thanks for pointing this out! —Granger (talk · contribs) 02:25, 31 July 2016 (UTC)

Error in page right sidebar under Lydia Canaan

Lydia Canaan is a Lebanese singer-songwriter noted for fusing Middle-Eastern quarter notes and microtones with anglophone rock,

This should read:

Lydia Canaan is a Lebanese singer-songwriter noted for fusing Middle-Eastern quarter tones and microtones with anglophone rock,

Quarter notes are a fundamental concept of music. Quarter tones, on the other hand, are middle eastern and special. 209.103.243.242 (talk) 03:27, 19 October 2016 (UTC)

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In the medium section

You should also put feeling due to the less able the hear. They can feel vibrations in which they can play music and sing. Brook1900 (talk) 23:44, 11 June 2017 (UTC)

Could you please elaborate more on this "feeling due to the less able the hear"? And, which section do you mean by "the medium" section? -- ChamithN (talk) 23:59, 11 June 2017 (UTC)

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Semi-protected edit request on 27 July 2017

157.49.3.172 (talk) 15:28, 27 July 2017 (UTC)

 Not done. Please tell us what edit you want to make. Thank you. ^{My name is}not^dave (talk/contribs) 15:32, 27 July 2017 (UTC)

Semi-protected edit request on 28 July 2017

49.230.28.249 (talk) 13:12, 28 July 2017 (UTC)

Not done: it's not clear what changes you want to be made. Please mention the specific changes in a "change X to Y" format. Marianna251TALK 13:31, 28 July 2017 (UTC)

Protection Adjustments

Updated images planned, please remove protection (or alter).

Hi Ariana young (talk) 20:39, 9 September 2017 (UTC)

Official curriculum in Elements of Music section

There is no encyclopedic significance for the discussion of government usage of these Elements of Music based on the sources listed. I recommend their removal, unless non-government sources describing their significance are put forward. They are too similar, too ambigious, too poorly cited, and too bureaucratic to be worth describing here. Krehel (talk) 17:32, 18 March 2017 (UTC)

Hi Ariana young (talk) 20:40, 9 September 2017 (UTC)

Semi-protected edit request on 10 October 2017

1.187.95.162 (talk) 00:37, 10 October 2017 (UTC)

Not done: it's not clear what changes you want to be made. Please mention the specific changes in a "change X to Y" format. SparklingPessimist ^{Scream at me!} 00:45, 10 October 2017 (UTC)

role of women section

There is a "role of women" section and no "role of men" section in this "Music" page. I recommend removing the "role of women" section (or at least adding a "role of men" section). — Preceding unsigned comment added by Flamingovelocity (talk • contribs) 20:49, 18 October 2017 (UTC)

Semi-protected edit request on 31 December 2017

117.20.117.127 (talk) 15:57, 31 December 2017 (UTC)

 Not done Empty request. Deli nk (talk) 16:12, 31 December 2017 (UTC)

Semi-protected edit request on 24 January 2018

from the sentence "Different styles or types of music may emphasize, de-emphasize or omit some of these elements". I suggest to erase the word "omit". There is no physical way to produce music nor sound omitting one of the elements mentioned in the sentence before (pitch, rhythm, dynamics, texture). Utnapishtin (talk) 06:25, 24 January 2018 (UTC)

There is plenty of music without some of these elements, and some without any of these. The only compulsory elements I can think of are duration and intent. -- Michael Bednarek (talk) 07:10, 24 January 2018 (UTC)

I´m sorry but that is not possible. Without any of it´s elements (pitch, rhythm, dynamics texture) there is no Sound it is just physics. ... Utnapishtin (talk) 18:46, 24 January 2018 (UTC)

References

Not done: It's not about omitting all of the musical elements; rather, it's about omitting a part of them. ToThAc (talk) 00:39, 25 January 2018 (UTC)

dear ToThAc, I appreciate your attempt to meet me in between (:D) but even omitting "parts" wouldn´t be possible: the only thing you can do is to omit mentioning or give for granted one of music´s elements Utnapishtin (talk) 02:49, 25 January 2018 (UTC)

Music doesn't always require sound. -- Michael Bednarek (talk) 01:39, 25 January 2018 (UTC)

soooooo: "Music without sound can refer to music that falls outside the range of human hearing (typically 20 Hz–20 kHz)" wich means that there is sound only that we cannot perceive it... for the rest "Silence in music happens when the music stops during a performance." means just that you are setting temporarily some of the parameters to 0 (it is just like saying that a pause is music too) but you are not omitting it... I think I made my point ;) Utnapishtin (talk) 02:59, 25 January 2018 (UTC)

To make your point, you need to respond to the rest of the article Music without sound and to the list of silent musical compositions, preferably there, not here. -- Michael Bednarek (talk) 09:44, 25 January 2018 (UTC)

the definition of word " music"

Music is musiqi in Iran which is similar to musikhi. and musikhi is composed from mu + sikhi. Mu in Persian language means "hair" and "sikhi" means stiff and straight hair. Also Tar means hair strand. For example 3-tar means an instrument with 3 strings. — Preceding unsigned comment added by 5.125.1.37 (talk) 17:58, 26 March 2018 (UTC)

The following topics need to be added in the section of See also.....

• Journal of Research in Music Education — Preceding unsigned comment added by 220.240.16.249 (talk) 03:54, 3 July 2018 (UTC)
• http://journals.sagepub.com/home/jmt — Preceding unsigned comment added by 220.240.16.249 (talk) 03:56, 3 July 2018 (UTC)
• https://academic.oup.com/jmt — Preceding unsigned comment added by 220.240.16.249 (talk) 04:02, 3 July 2018 (UTC)
• Music therapy
• Music psychology
• The Journal of Musicology — Preceding unsigned comment added by 220.240.16.249 (talk) 04:43, 3 July 2018 (UTC)
• Musicology — Preceding unsigned comment added by 220.240.16.249 (talk) 04:47, 3 July 2018 (UTC)

• List of musical instruments — Preceding unsigned comment added by 220.240.16.249 (talk) 04:55, 3 July 2018 (UTC)
• Journal of Music Teacher Education — Preceding unsigned comment added by 220.240.16.249 (talk) 05:08, 3 July 2018 (UTC)
• Journal of Music Theory — Preceding unsigned comment added by 220.240.16.249 (talk) 05:15, 3 July 2018 (UTC)
• Journal of Music Theory Pedagogy — Preceding unsigned comment added by 220.240.16.249 (talk) 05:22, 3 July 2018 (UTC)
• Music Analysis (journal)
• Music theory — Preceding unsigned comment added by 220.240.16.249 (talk) 05:35, 3 July 2018 (UTC)

Semi-protected edit request on 7 August 2018

Music : Traditionally it is said that music passed from the divine through Goddess Saraswati to Shri Narada (an Eternal Puranic Sage),

       who in turn  taught Gandharvas (divine musicians) and gifted the art of music to human kind.
       Music is first appeared in ancient china,as sages began to contemplate the notes created by wind as it whistled
       through the hollow Stems of bamboo.
       
       Foremost of the great masters of western music was  johann Sebastian Bach (1685-1750) and George Frideric Handel (1685-1759)
       Both Took their birth in great country Germany.
       Through his masterly 48 Preludes and Fugues  Bach helped to establish the basis of conventional western harmony ,
       A Pro folic composer of numerous operas and oratorios.
       His most famous work was The Messiah is said to have been composed in only 24 Days. Brother sergey (talk) 17:09, 7 August 2018 (UTC)

 Not done: it's not clear what changes you want to be made. Please mention the specific changes in a "change X to Y" format and provide a reliable source if appropriate. ‑‑ElHef (Meep?) 17:24, 7 August 2018 (UTC)

new music definition

Music is a non-verbal sonic linguistic communication created directly or indirectly by humans.

Note that this merely defines music, and does not imply or apply any aesthetic value to the interpretation of sounds that fall into this classification. — Preceding unsigned comment added by Oorfeo (talk • contribs) 08:27, 18 August 2018 (UTC)

References

Timbre Definition

Timbre should be characterized not only as the "color" but also as "tone" Thegamertag5575 (talk) 05:31, 26 January 2019 (UTC)

Producers

Producers are not mentioned in the short list of professions within the music industry included at the end of the introductory section of this page Thegamertag5575 (talk) 05:35, 26 January 2019 (UTC)

WikiProject

Please join our Paramore Wikiproject here Goveganplease (talk) 23:25, 10 March 2019 (UTC)

End of the 20th century section

The 20th century section leaves off with a somewhat stranded-seeming paragraph about rock. Seems like it should also talk about hip hop, pop, the club/rave scenes and EDM, and metal, which span a huge range of musical style and cultural influence but aren't really brought up or contextualized in the article much at all... —{{u|Goldenshimmer}} (they/their)｜😹｜✝️｜John 15:12｜☮️｜🍂｜T/C 03:29, 2 April 2019 (UTC)

The Republic

change ((The Republic)) to ((Republic (Plato)|The Republic))

Done; Minor edit only. —KuyaBriBri^Talk 14:58, 31 July 2019 (UTC)

Edits in Russian

Hi. We have a minor problem with additions to this page in Russian. On a couple of occasions I have explained politely that en.wikipedia Talk pages are in English but, to be honest, how badly do you have to Not Get It to do this? So I think in future I will, as with the most recent one, assume that it doesn't need explaining, and just roll it back. If you think this is wrong please feel to explain why. At the moment I don't think we have the time to waste on this. Best to all, DBaK (talk) 20:44, 11 November 2019 (UTC)

Lowest of the arts

Should this article point out that Immanuel Kant saw music as the lowest of the arts? This is, after all, what it says in the paper version of the Encyclopedia Brittanica. Vorbee (talk) 18:51, 20 February 2020 (UTC)

Can somebody link "art form"

It's unbearable, when you're playing the Wikipedia game, to find things that are not linked. Fix this problem today! DewlinTheDerp (talk) 12:01, 23 February 2020 (UTC)

DewlinTheDerp, we're not going to add links just to support the Wikipedia game. creffett (talk) 16:11, 23 February 2020 (UTC)

Two-Note Chord

"When musicians play three or more different notes at the same time, this creates a chord." A dyad is a two-note chord. — Preceding unsigned comment added by Heroic95 (talk • contribs) 05:25, 22 April 2019 (UTC)

Wikipedia's article on chords says "...as three notes are needed to define any common chord, three is often taken as the minimum number of notes that form a definite chord.[13] Hence, Andrew Surmani, for example, (2004, p. 72) states, "When three or more notes are sounded together, the combination is called a chord." George T. Jones (1994, p. 43) agrees: "Two tones sounding together are usually termed an interval, while three or more tones are called a chord." According to Monath (1984, p. 37); "A chord is a combination of three or more tones sounded simultaneously," and the distances between the tones are called intervals..."...There are some sources supporting your dyad approach in that article, too, but for simplicity's sake, I think the music article should say that chords are 3 or more notes. Readers who want to learn more about chords can click on the chord article.OnBeyondZebrax • TALK 12:38, 21 March 2020 (UTC)

Beginning amateur musicians...

According to the article "beginning amateur musicians take lessons with professional musicians". Sometimes they do, but this is not a rule. 85.193.228.103 (talk) 13:38, 19 June 2020 (UTC)

Music from nature

Music is loosely defined as a pleasant sound. It doesn't have to be man-made. We have the singing of the birds, the sound of dolphins and whales, grasshoppers, etc. I would like to see something like this in the text but I'm not sure where it would fit in.. Felixnicholson (talk) 19:21, 30 December 2020 (UTC)

Where did you find that definition? It's not mentioned at Definition of music. -- Michael Bednarek (talk) 02:30, 31 December 2020 (UTC)

I don’t know if I’ve seen music described that way, but one way might be in describing the early function of musical instruments. Some early musical instruments such as flutes (that were labeled “primitive” in the past) may have been made to imitate animal sounds. Today we might not call that music, but the instruments still end up labeled “musical instruments”. However, not all are pleasant or melodic. Jacqke (talk) 03:58, 31 December 2020 (UTC)

Is music a ission?

My grammar sucks! But is music is A lou sin? Sound that out, you will get what I mean, Art isn’t a issuion, but music is a hert of vibration in the sound, so music is that? Abigblueworld (talk) 02:47, 4 August 2021 (UTC)

Semi-protected edit request on 16 October 2021

it is stated texture and timbre is “sometimes termed the colour of a musical sound” there is however no source to this claim Nmang0 (talk) 15:43, 16 October 2021 (UTC)

 Not done: It is cited in the body. Leads do not require citations, as they are summaries of the article body. ScottishFinnishRadish (talk) 19:17, 16 October 2021 (UTC)

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Music

Good afternoon I was wondering if anyone could direct me to the right source, or professionals. I have have a few talents hat I can perform mainly relevant to musical arts and could do with as to were to go or talk to? I believe with arts I perform would be widely accepted and appreciated. Bringing fun back into music. Thank you HeadBoy MUNGA (talk) 16:04, 5 June 2022 (UTC)

Sorry, but we're Wikipedia, the online Encyclopedia. We don't assist in job searches, advertising or promotions. But I wish you luck in finding what you want elsewhere. Haploidavey (talk) 16:12, 5 June 2022 (UTC)

2022 rehaul

This article has too much fluff. I rewrote the introduction, I think to superior effect. The rest could use some sweeping changes.

The "elements" section needs to be transferred to the "elements of music" page. The section is longer and more detailed than the page itself (uh oh!), and there's no way we can reasonably list all the patterns and motifs that make up global music in one subsection. It does disservice to the depth of the concepts involved.

W. is great for Western classical music, thanks to a cornucopia of sources, but there is a lack of love for everything else - even modern Western music.

What shall we do to improve this article?

RedGrinchJr (talk) 09:33, 9 June 2022 (UTC)

RedGrinchJr, its great to see your enthusiasm here. I rewrote the Etymology and terminology section a week or two ago, and was planning to slowly chip away at the rest of the article. It's difficult to consider what improvements the article should need, since almost every section needs to be written entirely. The main thing is, as you allude to, the too narrow conception of music considered, which results in a both a Western content, and a very non-broad treatment of the subject. Your improvements to the lead (the introduction) are welcome, though the make it very choppy—we should stuck to 3–4 paragraphs, each and try to use less specific examples. At its core, the lead is meant to summarize the article, so it will have to keep changing until the article is rewritten. One place to start might be the Education section, which is way too detailed and confusing—having fields of study together with modern university programs is pointless. Also, talking about different ways to learn music would be much more effective than degree programs, which don't belong in the article at all imo. Aza24 (talk) 23:48, 9 June 2022 (UTC)

The etymology and terminology section is noticeably better than the entire rest of the page.

Lack of sources is a killer. We can raise the issue of Western centrism but it won't change until a bilingual scholar with non-Anglophone sources can bridge the gap. I am woefully unable to do so. The other language Wikipedias might have leads.

I maintain that popular examples of nonstandard works are crucial to prove that a reductive definition like "sounds with pitches and rhythms" cannot encompass all that is commonly called music. It is well established in musicology that music is described and not prescribed, so any assertion about the nature of music must be corroborated with real-world examples of that nature. To that end I have preserved some un-encyclopedic examples from the previous revisions.

Apropos of examples, Wikipedia should downplay controversies about "legitimacy" of what is music and what isn't because these foofaraws solve themselves and never rise to notability - but if we were to devote space to talking about it (not in the intro), these are some helpful examples I removed that could deserve to come back in some form (the context is that each of these pieces or styles were declared "not music" on arrival):

Beethoven's 1845 Grosse Fuge

early 20th century jazz

hardcore punk in the 1980s.

I agree that it would be better to have all this info woven throughout the body, not piled willy-nilly at the start, and that it would not be effective to scatter it throughout the existing text just yet; it's stronger (informatively) to replace batches of bad writing with less bad writing and let it propagate up and down the page. The gestalt article has never fit together well, and it can't accord to itself until its fundamental priorities are straightened out and bolstered with citations. RedGrinchJr (talk) 01:42, 10 June 2022 (UTC)

References

meter links to the unit of length

In the opening paragraph it mentions music is sometimes organized using meters, but then links to the unit of measurement instead of to the meter (music) page Ellynu (talk) 23:21, 16 June 2022 (UTC)

Now it links to Metre (music). Thanks! Just plain Bill (talk) 23:35, 16 June 2022 (UTC)

REMA

Rema — Preceding unsigned comment added by 102.91.4.126 (talk) 16:32, 12 September 2022 (UTC)

Music of Zambia

Hello. I have noticed, that in section see also is link to article Music of Zambia. Please, why this link is here? I think, that It belongs to another articles, for example to article about various musical traditions. So, this link will be removed. Thank You for understanding. Cassa342 (talk) 16:55, 12 September 2022 (UTC)

Sound, the origin of music.

The origin of sound and its derivation towards music should have been placed first, since its derivation is not radical but one or several derivations starting from the first instrument that the human being creates to

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produce a sound that allows him to be heard at a greater distance than his voice and trying to copy the *birds. And that instrument(s) should have been a wind instrument, like a flute but with only one hole, as it was the easiest to make. And yet, with a single note but with different volume and tempo, songs could be made that were clearly differentiated from the sounds they knew. Later, holes were added and it was at that moment that a "primary musical scale" was created, very rudimentary but effective because it already had several differentiated notes. Given that there are several hypotheses about its origin (sexual, festive, religious...) and as they all have their meaning, I would add that the original sound that created the musical scale materialised in very diverse cultures and different forms, as tribes from New Guinea did not have contact with tribes from Canada or Australia and therefore there is no single point of its creation but an amalgam of situations in which its use was necessary for that specific society.

The use of birds as a means to imitate them is due to their very extensive scale of notes, times and distance of their sounds and their distribution in any part of the planet; this is not the case with the rest of the animals whose notes do not reach that sonic extreme (and even if there were some tribes that managed to imitate a howler monkey or an elephant, they would surely be in the minority with respect to the generalised use). According to current archaeological findings, Chinese music dates back more than 9,000 years, :

Chinese music dates back 9,000 years. The JiaHu bone flute excavated at the Jiahu site is between 9000 and 7500 years old. [1] Around 7,000 years ago, bone whistles and primitive pottery began to appear everywhere.

zh. wikipedia.org

Jcollmart (talk) 10:51, 5 September 2022 (UTC)

All well and good, but without citing a reliable source, this looks like your own general speculation. Are you proposing a change to the article's text? Just plain Bill (talk) 18:58, 5 September 2022 (UTC)

Si, claro, el artículo debería ser cambiado. Por otra parte si las fuentes de Wikipedia no son fiables (puesto que Wikipedia no es una fuente fiable) ¿qué sentido tiene ponerlas?, pregunto. Jcollmart (talk) 15:52, 6 September 2022 (UTC)

Porque mis fuentes son la Wikipedia de Japón que deriva a Wikipedia de China: zh.wikipedia.org Jcollmart (talk) 15:54, 6 September 2022 (UTC)

This is the English-language Wikipedia; discussions should normally be conducted in English. Just plain Bill (talk) 16:23, 6 September 2022 (UTC)

Yes, of course, the article should be changed. On the other hand, if Wikipedia's sources are not reliable (since Wikipedia is not a reliable source), what is the point of putting them, I ask? Because my sources are Japan's Wikipedia which derives from China's Wikipedia: zh.wikipedia.org Jcollmart (talk) 16:29, 6 September 2022 (UTC)

We don't use other Wikipedias as sources, period. Please read WP:RS. OhNoitsJamie ^Talk 16:32, 6 September 2022 (UTC)

I agree an introduction in that way might be suitable if adequate citations can be found.. I would also like to see more information about sounds from nature which are musical e.g. the music of birds as mentioned above.. why are these always overlooked when setting about defining music? Felixnicholson (talk) 22:14, 23 November 2022 (UTC)