Talk:Murine coronavirus/GA1
Latest comment: 2 years ago by Graham Beards in topic GA Review
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Reviewer: Graham Beards (talk · contribs) 14:18, 26 May 2021 (UTC)
Comment
The English is poor and many parts of the article are incomprehensible. The second sentence of the Lead, for example, is impossible to decipher. I suspect a computer translator has been used. Much more work is needed on the prose before a GA nomination can be seriously considered. I suggest withdrawing this nomination; it is premature. Graham Beards (talk) 14:18, 26 May 2021 (UTC)
I have edited the article removed most of the gibberish that has been recently added. Sadly, it is still way below GA standard.Graham Beards (talk) 15:23, 26 May 2021 (UTC)