Talk:Munroe Bergdorf race row incident/GA1
Latest comment: 6 years ago by 3E1I5S8B9RF7 in topic GA Review
GA Review edit
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Reviewer: 3E1I5S8B9RF7 (talk · contribs) 11:42, 1 January 2018 (UTC)
Comments by 3E1I5S8B9RF7 edit
Very well written article. Balanced and reasonably well sourced. Just a couple of minor observations:
- In the "Background" section, the text says: "She was raped during this period, an event which inspired her to take a greater role in social activism". The Guardian source says: "Bergdorf was raped during the period she was transitioning; she reported it to the police, but the attacker was never found...". Maybe that info that the perpetrator was never caught should be added in the text to expand this a bit.
- Added. Midnightblueowl (talk) 13:41, 1 January 2018 (UTC)
- In the "Public response" section, "Jason Osamede Okundaye" is a red link. Either unlink him or consider writing an article about him. The same goes for "Illamasqua" in the "Aftermath" section.
- I've removed the two redlinks. Midnightblueowl (talk) 13:33, 1 January 2018 (UTC)
- Can "Pink News" be considered a reliable source?--3E1I5S8B9RF7 (talk) 11:42, 1 January 2018 (UTC)
- It's clearly not the best quality news source, but I think it fits the RS criteria. Certainly, it has been accepted as such for usage in FA-rated articles, such as Death of Leelah Alcorn and Murder of Dwayne Jones. Midnightblueowl (talk) 13:30, 1 January 2018 (UTC)
Many thanks, 3E1I5S8B9RF7! Midnightblueowl (talk) 13:41, 1 January 2018 (UTC)
Conclusion edit
Overall, I think this article meets the GA criteria and I am giving it a pass, accordingly.--3E1I5S8B9RF7 (talk) 14:12, 1 January 2018 (UTC)
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