Talk:Multitude: War and Democracy in the Age of Empire

Cleanup

Added the cleanup tag. This article seems a little like a press release rather than a piece about Negri and Hardt's work. There must be more to say.

The section divisions aren't capitalized either. Dieziege 06:25, 24 August 2006 (UTC)

The link "multitude.org" leads nowhere! Not exactly nowhere, but there is pretty much nothing on it, and it certainly does not "bring together ..." what it promised. So I deleted it.

Potential copyvio

Much of the text in the "Context" section seems to be copied and pasted from Raymond van de Wiel's website, which is a blatant violation. This text needs to be re-written and cited properly in order to avoid speedy deletion. Thanks for your attention to this matter. Wild Goose 19:36, 17 May 2007 (UTC)

Incomprehensible

This article is impossible to understand. Someone who has read the book should re-write it so that the sentences actually have meanings. Misodoctakleidist 04:54, 16 November 2007 (UTC)

It is strange that the main quote is not from the book itself Szczels 21:04, 1 December 2007 (UTC)

Wrong Title

The page is supposed to be about the book, Multitude: War and Democracy in the Age of Empire, but the bulk of the entry is actually about the earlier Negri and Hardt book, Empire. Propose to delete the Context section. Profhanley (talk) 15:50, 15 May 2012 (UTC)

Revision

I have started revising the substance of the page to produce a more wikipedia-friendly version. Profhanley (talk) 20:49, 23 September 2013 (UTC)

Not quite encyclopaedic

The whole last paragraph reads like a subjective comment that may or may not be accurate, nevertheless it is not substantiated or supported in any way: "The rapid growth of the alter-globalisation movement, evident in the large protests in Seattle in 1999 and in Genova in 2001, along with the creation of the World Social Forum in Porto Alegre, also in 2001, seemed to substantiate the optimistic outlook at the end of Empire. The terrorist attacks on September 11, 2001 and subsequent rise of state-sponsored "counter-terrorism" seem, however, to have complicated this optimism." I propose to ask for source or delete. — Preceding unsigned comment added by 91.140.90.131 (talk) 16:17, 18 January 2018 (UTC)

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