Talk:Muhammad Abd Allah Mansur Al Futuri

Latest comment: 16 years ago by BWH76 in topic Photo caption revert

disputed picture edit

Replaced transcluded image with inline image - {{npov}} tag as per dispute on Template talk:Combatant Status Review Tribunal trailer image and caption. Geo Swan 04:47, 23 September 2007 (UTC)Reply

Photo caption revert edit

This caption, as it previously read, contains two errors. The first, and the rather insignificant one, is as follows: "...were held in a trailer the size of a large RV." The reference given explicitly states in the first sentence that these reviews were held in "a double-wide trailer".

The second is much more important, in my opinion. In an effort to clean the caption up to remove the NPOV tag, I removed the sentence "The captive sat on a plastic garden chair, with his hands and feet shackled to a bolt in the floor". The reason I changed this is that the source listed in the caption was about one specific detainee and not the specific subject of any of the articles. In fact, the person described in that source is not named, so we cannot definitively state who was in fact "shackled to the floor". I think that this (and the word "only" in the last sentence) are the grounds for the tag as stating these detainees were treated in a certain way that is not supported by citations is a case of a non-neutral point of view. BWH76 (talk) 16:35, 16 April 2008 (UTC)Reply

Additionally, I removed the image of a watch from this page as, after reading the article, I couldn't see the purpose of including this image. BWH76 (talk) 16:41, 16 April 2008 (UTC)Reply