Talk:Muhammad-Ali Abdur-Rahkman/GA1

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Reviewer: Courcelles (talk · contribs) 16:10, 26 April 2018 (UTC)

Will do this one shortly. Courcelles (talk) 16:10, 26 April 2018 (UTC)

• "As a senior, he was a" We need a more graceful transition in going from high school to talking about something four years later.
  • New paragraph.-TonyTheTiger (T / C / WP:FOUR / WP:CHICAGO / WP:WAWARD) 17:29, 26 April 2018 (UTC)
• "Dave Rooney had been a friend of John Beilein" Surely both these guys have articles that could be linked here?
  • Beilein linked.-TonyTheTiger (T / C / WP:FOUR / WP:CHICAGO / WP:WAWARD) 17:32, 26 April 2018 (UTC)
• "Walton remained sidelined the rest of the season.[citation needed]" Obvious problem here...
  • Ref added.-TonyTheTiger (T / C / WP:FOUR / WP:CHICAGO / WP:WAWARD) 18:59, 26 April 2018 (UTC)
• Sophomore and especially Junior seasons are really underdeveloped as opposed to the other two years. They need expansion
  • Expanded a bit.-TonyTheTiger (T / C / WP:FOUR / WP:CHICAGO / WP:WAWARD) 18:55, 26 April 2018 (UTC)
• How about the Draft? Any RS covering him as an NBA prospect?
  • No major RS are suggesting he will be drafted. I do not expect him to be invited to the NBA draft combine. However, if he is, I will add it to the article.-TonyTheTiger (T / C / WP:FOUR / WP:CHICAGO / WP:WAWARD) 19:10, 26 April 2018 (UTC)

Courcelles (talk) 16:22, 26 April 2018 (UTC)

• All looks fine now. Promoting. Courcelles (talk) 00:32, 27 April 2018 (UTC)