Talk:Mr. Driller Drill Spirits/GA1
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Reviewer: DasallmächtigeJ (talk · contribs) 14:06, 14 February 2020 (UTC)
Going to review this over the weekend, as it seems to be a very well-written article with a managable workload.--DasallmächtigeJ (talk) 14:06, 14 February 2020 (UTC)
1. Is it well-written? edit
Yes, only a few minor points I would like to adress...
Lede edit
- I would either remove "drilling" from the lede or make it a point to mention that the characters operate drillers (or are drilling robots?)
Gameplay edit
- does the game have an actual story that could be summarized here? It seems to have rather fleshed out characters for this type of game...
- ...taking advantage of the Nintendo DS' dual screens... -->basically the same sentence as in development later on. One of the two shuld be rephrased.
2. Is it verifiable with no original research? edit
Copyvio etc. come up negative. The article is very well researched, all sources, including magazines, are archived and available, all information seems to be fatual (can't say anything about the Japanese sources though)
3. Is it broad in its coverage? edit
As far as coverage of the game itself is concerned, yes, it is extremely detailed. Yet, shouldn't there be a section about (direct?) sequels/future installments?
4. Is it neutral? edit
Yes.
5. Is it stable? edit
Yes.
6. Is it illustrated? edit
Yes.
Conclusion edit
Overall, a great piece of work. Should easily pass, if the points above are adressed.--DasallmächtigeJ (talk) 14:23, 14 February 2020 (UTC)
- @DasallmächtigeJ:: Fixed the issues you addressed. There really isn't much of a story to this game (or barely one), so I didn't include it. Namcokid47 (Contribs) 20:07, 14 February 2020 (UTC)
- ALright, article is passed.--DasallmächtigeJ (talk) 09:44, 15 February 2020 (UTC)